I hope someone close to you is raped and killed.

She loves him after killing her friend?! How does that make any sense? This is not an very faithful Hermione- so out of character and OC ! This is just awful- he's rape, tortured, killed, and all of sudden she's in love? Yea, no thanks! You killed Hermione's strong, resilient character!

You did Hermione dirty

WTF you did Hermione wrong! She's a fighter always. He killed her best friend, rape her! WTF!?

good story

Wow, what a story! I could not put this one down. You did a great job writing Lucius into a character that you start out hating and then end up loving without making the transition unrealistic. I did find your writing of Hermione a little weak and too vulnerable at times, but overall, you did a great job developing her into falling for Lucius. It was intense and gave me shivers at times. Overall, you did a fantastic job!

Thinking back to a previous chapter, I wonder if Severus said something to her to make her say that he will rescue her. But she could have been delusional at the time too. I guess I'll ha e to wait and see.

Hold up. You were doing so well until this chapter. No way in hell, does Her mine return to the Manor knowing that soon she will be given to Colden ort and seeing the Wesley be killed. You have turned her too quickly and have made this story not realistic anymore. So done! Man, and I was hoping for not a letdown...

I cant believe i read this, it was so long..(in one night) But being very happy that i did, great work! Loved the Thomas - Bella name part in the end!

LOVED THIS!

Yeah :) Enjoyed your fic, thought it was really well written and I loved this Lucius, a great combination of evil bastard and good guy. Thanks!

Brilliant! Xxx

Very nice beginning) Just love it)

Such a touching story. I admire your editing skills and the way you were able to make Lucius Malfoy, a formidable death eater, into a loving and tender man without ruining his character. Bravo!

Great story!