Sorry but Harry calling Sirius Pa is just really disturbing to me. Dad is a good one, so is father, but pa?

"A ribbon you could place on your child and let it run around"
I don't know where you're from - obviously not an English-speaking country, but my point is, people do not call children "it" in English! A child is a person, a human being. You call a person he, she, or they if you want to stay gender-neutral. You never call them IT.

Umm - a boggart is defeated by laughter, not destroyed. Otherwise they couldn't have kept using the same boggart for the entire Defense class. Once the first person faced and destroyed it, there would be no more boggart. Just like Voldemort was defeated by Harry as a baby, but not destroyed. That's why he kept coming back ...

They may have the saying "innocent until proven guilty", but it's only a saying. It's not the truth. The truth is guilty until proven innocent. When someone is accused of a crime they are arrested and put in jail until taken before a judge. Are innocent people put in jail? No. As soon as they are accused, they are assumed to be guilty until they prove they are not.

Hi there: I'm so happy that you spoke of your German back ground as it makes your Spelling etc. explainable. I knew there was a reason for your spelling and odd phraseology. You have a great imagination and I enjoy your stories. Happy writing!

Whelp the was certainly different. In a good way though :)

If u do remember which one shotyou got the idea from, please do tell me...

'On purpose' but 'by accident'. Don't ask me why the difference; it just is. I only mention it to you because you are not a native English speaker—though you write it better than I can write any of my acquired languages. I have given up trying to teach our world basic grammar and vocabulary. In the case of non-English writers, I am more than a little in awe of your skill. I used to work with immigrants from Greece and Russia and was always re-assuring them that their ability was equal to and often better than that of people born here. Our students graduate high school and have had next to no language training. When they reach university, they are often required to take remedial English. It is sad that we have to put students at that level into what is comparable to 'English as a Second Language'. I ignore most of your infelicities knowing, as I said, that your ability with my language exceeds my accomplishments in French, for instance, even after five years high school and two years university study. In any case, I'm enjoying your story. In fact, I think I may have read it previously!

Absolutely love this! I love how Sirius saved Harry and how their lives are changing! Although Dumbles is annoyingly evil and I just want to kill him in the most painful way but it's fine! Sirius will make sure that he pays for what he's done to the wizarding world and to Harry and himself! Fuck you Dumbles!

Honestly I prefer stories were he branch’s out from Ron and hermione and honestly I’m not a fan of combining technology and magic.

You want to know what’s funny and incorrect about your assumptions on divination. Only prophecy’s cause one to fall into a trance it’s the fact that she produced the prophecy about Voldemort that she was accepted as a professor. But seers also make predictions all the time and many of her predictions turned out to be true.

You do realize that no family vault would have near the amounts that they have. Some of those causers had roughly 500 million galleons seriously? For starters there is no reason why any of said vaults would have that much cause once there is no available hero or lord after a certain period of time the assets would be liquidated and spread to all relatives outside of said line. Also due to wizard population being only in the tens of millions it is in no way justified for that many vaults to have that much moneyx

Honestly people need to really think about snape for a second both dumbledore and snape both knew Voldemort would eventually return. When he did snape was going to have to be a spy again is reputation amongst the pure bloods couldn’t be bad so he needed to show favoritism towards them. Snape by his own nature is a very impartial person and value competence over status.

Accidental magic and wandless magic are two completely different things. Also can we please acknowledge that wandless magic is in no way superior to wand magic. Wands allow a proper level of control without having to sacrifice most of the power behind it. To actually make a wandless spell equal to a spell with a wand it takes days if not weeks of practice to actually match it. Even then complex spells are nearly impossible without extensive talent and years of practice.

Your spelling and grammar really are atrocious! "Sweat spells"? Like, come on! Sweaty spells? I like your story, but your lack of care is distracting!