Reviews for Discarded
246vili chapter 12 . 11/5/2019
Great story.
I enjoyed reading it.

Now to read the continuation written by Ashkar.
TMI Fairy chapter 1 . 9/10/2019
LOL!
What fanboism! 2 cute!11
amayranni22 chapter 12 . 6/14/2019
go saito
SuperFireman151 chapter 12 . 6/12/2019
will you be continuing this story?
Guest chapter 12 . 12/6/2018
When's the next one the story was getting good
Reader 1 chapter 12 . 10/12/2018
Where are the rest of the chapters I've been waiting for about 3 months I need more. Plz.
Guest chapter 9 . 9/21/2018
This is real shit.
Guest chapter 12 . 9/20/2018
This is garbage.
Guest chapter 12 . 9/6/2018
Hey bud. You should update this story. It is so amazing. You are damn creative. I really enjoyed this story and even though it’s been 7 years since it’s been updated. I still wish to see the end of it
Ashkar chapter 10 . 9/3/2018
So I've been thinking of continuing this story. I have sent messages to the author and have been waiting for a reply. I was told on reddit, by a couple of friends who read a lot of fanfic's and some other author's on here that since its been 7 years since its been updated and it's a fanfic that I can continue the story as long as I give the original author credit in my A/N. With that being said I wanted to throw a couple ideas for where i'm was going to take the story to see what you guys thought.

First this is going to be a SaitoXSiesta story for sure and I will make that very clear in the first chapter if I continue this story. I may turn it into a harem, maybe, maybe not. If I do I have a pretty set list of who might be included. Henrietta would be one b/c to be honest she is my 2nd favorite character in this anime. Ara is a great character GatsuBerk came up with so she is always an option. Kirche would also be another one. I never see people include her in the MCs harem in other fanfic's or even just a relationship with just those 2 but I think that GatsuBerk did a great job with Kirche and making it very apparent that, while she still wants to get Saito into bed, she also wants more then that from him. Tiffania and Tabitha are always great options b/c well they are both awesome. Maybe Mon-Mon also b/c like Kirche she is never involved in the story like that but once again he did a good job developing that character. The only reason I'm even considering a harem to be honest is bc of Autobot Rewinds fanfic FoZ: Saving Grace. That story is so good I wish it was what the anime was based off of.

Second part is about Louise. I absolutely HATE Louise's character. I will not include her in the harem no matter what (if I go that route). I'm actually thinking of making her a villain that's how much I can't stand her.

Third would be Saito's new powers as a True Gandalfr. I'm not quite sure where to take those powers but based on what I read they are going to make him pretty OP which is why I'll probably do the Battle of 70,000. I was going to skip it but being that he became an even more powerful version of the Gandalfr I don't see why I should skip it now.

Lastly, if I do continue this story you should expect it to continue along the same main story as the anime does as far as the war with Albion, Tabitha's problem with Joseph, etc. Since this would be my first fanfic I think it's a good idea from me to have a basic outline for me to follow so I don't get overwhelmed with my first story.

Let me know what you guys think about this. Any feedback/opinions/etc would be greatly appreciated.
Ashkar chapter 11 . 9/3/2018
So I've been thinking of continuing this story. I have sent messages to the author and have been waiting for a reply. I was told on reddit, by a couple of friends who read a lot of fanfic's and some other author's on here that since its been 7 years since its been updated and it's a fanfic that I can continue the story as long as I give the original author credit in my A/N. With that being said I wanted to throw a couple ideas for where i'm was going to take the story to see what you guys thought.

First this is going to be a SaitoXSiesta story for sure and I will make that very clear in the first chapter if I continue this story. I may turn it into a harem, maybe, maybe not. If I do I have a pretty set list of who might be included. Henrietta would be one b/c to be honest she is my 2nd favorite character in this anime. Ara is a great character GatsuBerk came up with so she is always an option. Kirche would also be another one. I never see people include her in the MCs harem in other fanfic's or even just a relationship with just those 2 but I think that GatsuBerk did a great job with Kirche and making it very apparent that, while she still wants to get Saito into bed, she also wants more then that from him. Tiffania and Tabitha are always great options b/c well they are both awesome. Maybe Mon-Mon also b/c like Kirche she is never involved in the story like that but once again he did a good job developing that character. The only reason I'm even considering a harem to be honest is bc of Autobot Rewinds fanfic FoZ: Saving Grace. That story is so good I wish it was what the anime was based off of.

Second part is about Louise. I absolutely HATE Louise's character. I will not include her in the harem no matter what (if I go that route). I'm actually thinking of making her a villain that's how much I can't stand her!

Lastly, if I do continue this story you should expect it to continue along the same main story as the anime does as far as the war with Albion, Tabitha's problem with Joseph, etc. Since this would be my first fanfic I think it's a good idea from me to have a basic outline for me to follow so I don't get overwhelmed with my first story.

Let me know what you guys think about this. Any feedback/opinions/etc would be greatly appreciated.
Ashkar chapter 5 . 9/3/2018
So I've been thinking of continuing this story. I have sent messages to the author and have been waiting for a reply. I was told on reddit, by a couple of friends who read a lot of fanfic's and some other author's on here that since its been 7 years since its been updated and it's a fanfic that I can continue the story as long as I give the original author credit in my A/N. With that being said I wanted to throw a couple ideas for where i'm was going to take the story to see what you guys thought.

First this is going to be a SaitoXSiesta story for sure and I will make that very clear in the first chapter if I continue this story. I may turn it into a harem, maybe, maybe not. If I do I have a pretty set list of who might be included. Henrietta would be one b/c to be honest she is my 2nd favorite character in this anime. Ara is a great character GatsuBerk came up with so she is always an option. Kirche would also be another one. I never see people include her in the MCs harem in other fanfic's or even just a relationship with just those 2 but I think that GatsuBerk did a great job with Kirche and making it very apparent that, while she still wants to get Saito into bed, she also wants more then that from him. Tiffania and Tabitha are always great options b/c well they are both awesome. Maybe Mon-Mon also b/c like Kirche she is never involved in the story like that but once again he did a good job developing that character. The only reason I'm even considering a harem to be honest is bc of Autobot Rewinds fanfic FoZ: Saving Grace. That story is so good I wish it was what the anime was based off of.

Second part is about Louise. I absolutely HATE Louise's character. I will not include her in the harem no matter what (if I go that route). I'm actually thinking of making her a villain that's how much I can't stand her.

Lastly if I do continue this story you should expect it to continue along the same main story as the anime does as far as the war with Albion, Tabitha's problem with Joseph, etc. Since this would be my first fanfic I think it's a good idea from me to have a basic outline for me to follow so I don't get overwhelmed with my first story.

Let me know what you guys think about this. Any feedback/opinions/etc would be greatly appreciated.
Ashkar chapter 4 . 9/3/2018
So I've been thinking of continuing this story. I have sent messages to the author and have been waiting for a reply. I was told on reddit, by a couple of friends who read a lot of fanfic's and some other author's on here that since its been 7 years since its been updated and it's a fanfic that I can continue the story as long as I give the original author credit in my A/N. With that being said I wanted to throw a couple ideas for where i'm was going to take the story to see what you guys thought.

First this is going to be a SaitoXSiesta story for sure and I will make that very clear in the first chapter if I continue this story. I may turn it into a harem, maybe, maybe not. If I do I have a pretty set list of who might be included. Henrietta would be one b/c to be honest she is my 2nd favorite character in this anime. Ara is a great character GatsuBerk came up with so she is always an option. Kirche would also be another one. I never see people include her in the MCs harem in other fanfic's or even just a relationship with just those 2 but I think that GatsuBerk did a great job with Kirche and making it very apparent that, while she still wants to get Saito into bed, she also wants more then that from him. Tiffania and Tabitha are always great options b/c well they are both awesome. Maybe Mon-Mon also b/c like Kirche she is never involved in the story like that but once again he did a good job developing that character. The only reason I'm even considering a harem to be honest is bc of Autobot Rewinds fanfic FoZ: Saving Grace. That story is so good I wish it was what the anime was based off of.

Second part is about Louise. I absolutely HATE Louise's character. I will not include her in the harem no matter what (if I go that route). I'm actually thinking of making her a villain that's how much I can't stand her.

Lastly, if I do continue this story you should expect it to continue along the same main story as the anime does as far as the war with Albion, Tabitha's problem with Joseph, etc. Since this would be my first fanfic I think it's a good idea from me to have a basic outline for me to follow, so I don't get overwhelmed with my first story.

Let me know what you guys think about this. Any feedback/opinions/etc would be greatly appreciated.
Ashkar chapter 3 . 9/3/2018
So I've been thinking of continuing this story. I have sent messages to the author and have been waiting for a reply. I was told on reddit, by a couple of friends who read a lot of fanfic's and some other author's on here that since its been 7 years since its been updated and it's a fanfic that I can continue the story as long as I give the original author credit in my A/N. With that being said I wanted to throw a couple ideas for where i'm was going to take the story to see what you guys thought.

First this is going to be a SaitoXSiesta story for sure and I will make that very clear in the first chapter if I continue this story. I may turn it into a harem, maybe, maybe not. If I do I have a pretty set list of who might be included. Henrietta would be one b/c to be honest she is my 2nd favorite character in this anime. Ara is a great character GatsuBerk came up with so she is always an option. Kirche would also be another one. I never see people include her in the MCs harem in other fanfic's or even just a relationship with just those 2 but I think that GatsuBerk did a great job with Kirche and making it very apparent that, while she still wants to get Saito into bed, she also wants more then that from him. Tiffania and Tabitha are always great options b/c well they are both awesome. Maybe Mon-Mon also b/c like Kirche she is never involved in the story like that but once again he did a good job developing that character. The only reason I'm even considering a harem to be honest is bc of Autobot Rewinds fanfic FoZ: Saving Grace. That story is so good I wish it was what the anime was based off of.

Second part is about Louise. I absolutely HATE Louise's character. I will not include her in the harem no matter what (if I go that route). I'm actually thinking of making her a villain that's how much I can't stand her.

Lastly, if I do continue this story you should expect it to continue along the same main story as the anime does as far as the war with Albion, Tabitha's problem with Joseph, etc. Since this would be my first fanfic I think it's a good idea from me to have a basic outline for me to follow so I don't get overwhelmed with my first story.

Let me know what you guys think about this. Any feedback/opinions/etc would be greatly appreciated!
Ashkar chapter 2 . 9/3/2018
So I've been thinking of continuing this story. I have sent messages to the author and have been waiting for a reply. I was told on reddit, by a couple of friends who read a lot of fanfic's and some other author's on here that since its been 7 years since its been updated and it's a fanfic that I can continue the story as long as I give the original author credit in my A/N. With that being said I wanted to throw a couple ideas for where i'm was going to take the story to see what you guys thought.

First this is going to be a SaitoXSiesta story for sure and I will make that very clear in the first chapter if I continue this story. I may turn it into a harem, maybe, maybe not. If I do I have a pretty set list of who might be included. Henrietta would be one b/c to be honest she is my 2nd favorite character in this anime. Ara is a great character GatsuBerk came up with so she is always an option. Kirche would also be another one. I never see people include her in the MCs harem in other fanfic's or even just a relationship with just those 2 but I think that GatsuBerk did a great job with Kirche and making it very apparent that, while she still wants to get Saito into bed, she also wants more then that from him. Tiffania and Tabitha are always great options b/c well they are both awesome. Maybe Mon-Mon also b/c like Kirche she is never involved in the story like that but once again he did a good job developing that character. The only reason I'm even considering a harem to be honest is bc of Autobot Rewinds fanfic FoZ: Saving Grace. That story is so good I wish it was what the anime was based off of.

Second part is about Louise. I absolutely HATE Louise's character. I will not include her in the harem no matter what (if I go that route). I'm actually thinking of making her a villain that's how much I can't stand her.

Lastly, if I do continue this story you should expect it to continue along the same main story as the anime does as far as the war with Albion, Tabitha's problem with Joseph, etc. Since this would be my first fanfic I think it's a good idea from me to have a basic outline for me to follow so I don't get overwhelmed with my first story.

Let me know what you guys think about this. Any feedback/opinions/etc would be greatly appreciated.
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