Hi, I know you posted that you are on hiatus now, but stil, I think your fics are great and if you ever should continue with your stories, Im sure that there will be many happy readers (including me, of course). So I quess thats all. Good luck and all :)

Awwww! This is simply too amazing for words! The fairytale is very intriguing and well written! Do update soon! :)

wow an other chap. keep going go...go..go

Muraki, that sneaky little devil. I guess he found a way to include Tsuzuki in his narration. Love the fic, and I don't find it confusing. Looking forward to reading more, and more of 'Murasaki'.

actually only slightly confusing at the end, but i got it. Overall good stary chapter. I wanna be all wrapped up and next to muraki telling me a story, well the muraki that you portray that is lol

this wasn't confusing at all. i wonder why you thought it would be confusing. anyway, this was so sweet. the little prince didn't know how to kiss. Aaaawwwwwww. it was a very nice touch when muraki turned their bedroom into the prince's bedroom from the story. and it was just too cute the way the prince ordered his sensi to kiss him. i can't wait to see what the little prince will order him to do next.

Hey, Hey, Hey, HEY! No Fair, No Fair, No Fair, NO FAIR! You did it again! *whines*

This WAS AMAZING

I actually got caught in it and forgot Muraki was even telling a story XD

It's also good to know you'll be updating Murasaki, I'll be looking forward to that

Keep up the awesome work -

Awwww, that's sweet, a bedtime story for Tsuzuki. You knew Muraki would make it about Tsuzuki. I like seeing Muraki's sweet side. So many fics I read he's an utter bastard. I know he's like that in the series, but still...Anyway, very sweet, I look forward to reading more of this fic and others.

so cute... muraki so romantic... i will wait 4 u'r murasaki fic. see u again..

I really like this. Tsuzuki can be really child like when he feels at home and comfortable so I could easily imagine him being scared of a thunder storm. Also I like the way Muraki remembers his mother becuase of the storm too, maybe he was afraid of storms himself as a child?

The story he's telling does make me think of the story world in the manga which Tsuzuki got sucked into when looking for the counts mask. Thats not a bad thing just an observations. I want to hear more too! So i'm sticking this on my subscribed stories list. Looking forward to the next part.

I loved the story withina story technique. Quite different tho and it was so cute how tsuzuki was acting like a child but who wouldnt when there is a storm raging outside and someone is telling you a bedtime story to calm you down.

hey, i'm not sleepy either. the story was just starting to get good. i want to hear more about the prince and his sensi. the story within the story was great and i am looking forward to hearing kazutaka finish it. if he doesn't finish it i'm going to have to send tatsumi to ruin their fun.

NO! You can't stop there Muraki! Like Tsuzuki said they JUST kissed and confessed to each other! *whines* I DEMAND THAT YOU CONTINUE! *stomps foot and pouts*