smh Kim hissing to ron are you kidding me the one time i have a head cold you get a female tracking aroma that had the other females asking someone who is very much taken if I ever hear that my bf let some other girl date you I will Burt you both then I will drag your half beaten body to shego and yori and let them finish the job you are allowed to date me shego and yori no one else but us three got it

Awesome story! can't wait to see what happens in the next story (update soon Plz)

wow who knew drakkens invention actully worked and i didnt want to know what would happen if shego was effected by that stuff and going lovey dovey to ron

Lol i lve the ending! and eewww! socks from last night! gross!

hmmm... funny

that was a nice fun read.

Good job.

Larry (Sentinel 103)

We don't get nearly enough pre-ship stories. This one was great, truly capturing the spirit of the show. The images and dialog were perfect.

A well plot story.

Cool story, Good luck with this looking forward to

reading the rest of the story.

Ja ne

Kaiba1288

A nice story. Many writers would have had Ron actually fooling around, but you didn't. Kudos for not taking the low road! When Shego brought Drakken the formula, you mis-spelled 'good deed' for the day as 'good dead'. But in the case of Shego, it works great as a pun. Sometimes the best wordplay is unintentional! :)

The title was a bit off-putting, but the story within was innocent (and rather different from the title). This plot is one of those things that could show up in an episode of a kid's cartoon without the "tougher questions" about what happens next being asked - like the "Gadget's cousin Lawhinie kissing Dale and Chip" episode of Rescue Rangers or how the episode 'Emotion Sickness' would be viewed by the original target demographic of Kim Possible.

Also, your way of keeping Kim out of it was creative and didn't introduce a weird plot hole.

Poor Ronnie, he never could really catch a break, even with this development.

Too bad Kimmie had that cold, it would have made things a bit more interesting. But for her attitude, she wouldn't have been so cranky about Ron's being a babe magnet, though...

CB73

Cute Valentine's story.

I love the:

Ron ignored Kim as he sat huddled like a ball in a corner slowly rocking and repeating over and over "Make it stop. Please make it stop."

I can see that happening with Ron.

I also liked the way you were able to keep Kim from being affected.

Thanks for writing this.

Well, that was rather good for a laugh, though I would love for this to be an actual story where the girls that were effected by the spray actually realized how much Ron means to them, and how they'll try to win him over.