Poor thing... This won't happen to Sokka, though, because someone can see him. I still feel really sorry for her, though.

Tear my heart out and make me cry! This was so stirring! Poor Mai!

wow

Aw! Poor Mai! You can't help but feel bad for her.

Your story's are amazing. This is the second one I have read I can't believe how good they are you should seriously consider writing a novel.

So because you're such a great writer I decided to stalk all your other stories. This was awesome. in a depressing sort of way. I've always loved Mai, but at the same time I'm a Zutarian at heart (no matter how much my logical side shuns the idea) so this was pretty great. Bittersweet and Tragic and awesome.

...Aaaaand now I'm crying.

Oh wow! This was incredibly sad but I really enjoyed reading it.

That was heartbreaking. Well done :'(

- Sera

Whoa. This was really good. I mean, I'm a Zutara fan, but I'm trying to understand Maiko more now, and this really helped. The concept of Mai as a ghost is really interesting. I have a question though, where was Zuko during the last scene? Did he flee with Katara or was he still in the palace?

That was so amazing. It really was. I loved the idea, I loved the execution. And I'm not trying to turn this into a shipping issue, but I do want to ask: are you more a Zuko/Katara person or a Zuko/Mai person? I'm just curious, because the story could really sway either way.

I loved your portrayal of Ghost!Mai by the way. I felt her pain.

That was one of the strangest fanfics I have ever had the pleasure of reading. I love Zuko and Mai as a couple, though many people think otherwise. Your story was short and direct, and I liked reading it a lot.

*sigh if relief* thank you Aang, fir doing something. Poor Mai!

aww, poor Mai :(

I'm a zutara fan, but this story made me fell bad for mai

WTF did I just read?