Very interesting story! I like dark Molly. Not a pairing I've seen before but I like it.

The dialog here is so fitting! And you know what, the nonverbal conversation is just as telling. Lovely work!

Badass!Moran!Molly pleases me no end. Almost as much as the phrase "gunman with benefits". Thank you very muchly for bringing this fic into existance! xx Nice writing too, understatedly-saucy. I don't much like any Jim-pairings, but your words are gorgeous. Excuse me as I go and trawl through your other- HOLY- 157 stories? Exxxxcellent. My plans for the week's readings are sorted.

Ooooooo! This was delicious!

I do love a bit of "dark" Molly, she's a bit too squeaky clean to be true for me, I think her and Jim make a good pair.

Loved reading this, thanks for writing.

Very good and clever. Interestingly wrote as well. Whilst still pretty much in character for Molly and Jim. XD

This is a really interesting take on Molly and Moriarty's relationship- I like the back story. Molly isn't quite tough enough for my taste, and you definitely fixed that. Nice :)