Truly one of my favourites. You did your research & just overall did an amazing job, in my view.

Dear Kalen Bloodstone,

THANK YOU for making the one decent A/M fic I've read in a while (i.e. the last ten hours)

Keep writing, please

Hugs and Kisses, YF, ALIXIA

This, is probably the best Minerva/Artemis shipping I've read. Well done.

There were only a few small grammar and spelling mistakes. For example you spelled 'plate' as 'plait'.

Sorry I didn't review earlier. I really enjoyed reading this, good job.

Yo.

I was meaning to review this like a month ago,

but I kept putting it off. -_-

Anyways, here goes.

There were a few spelling mistakes,

but it didn’t interfere with the story. )

I like how you created a conflict between Artemis and Minerva. It’s different from other A/M fics.

And it’s so much better than my epic fail of an A/M story.

Beautiful word choice, very descriptive,

interesting plot, and the right amount of romance.

Overall, I’ll give you a solid A.

Okay.

This’ll sound really immature and stupid, but you’re a dude?

Ever since you’ve reviewed me, I thought you were a girl.

No offense by the way. *coughs awkwardly*

You don’t see a lot of guys writing love stories.

And I give kudos to you for writing a great one. D

This is AWESOME!

Artemis and Minerva forever

Okay in the seventh sentence you put a comma between candles and flickered [ Candles,flickered, and hair...] Good story though I like Hartemis[?]. Just HollyxArtemis.