Very well written! You're a great writer!

Oh my goodness! So much sex! You've really put in a lot of detail lol. Different concept, and I loved all the romantic drama. Nice work :D

I loved this story. So full of pain and love. Very sad and very sweet.
Thank you!

Beautiful...just beautiful...this has definitely become one of my most favorite stories cuz of it's sweetness and dayum that was hot!

ahh thanks sooo much for making this! w

Heart-stopping and heart-warming at the same time. :) Really nicely done.

Mmm... it was a nice story in the beginning, but that end smut left me mindless. I... I don't think I can prpduce he proper compliments, but they're there.

This is soooooo amazing! 3

Well then. Very very amazing fic. The storyline was on point and so sweet to the core. I felt so bad for Roxy and his quilt :(. The smut btw was just quite...well it's a bit hot at the moment. So yea. Me tinks u get it :p

hot hot HOT!

great writting, great story, great sex. :D 3333

.Shit.I have NEVER read this much porn in one setting. EVER. And, . . I just really loved it, and SOOOOOO MUCH PORN! and SEX and oh my fucken god it took me over 2 hours to read the damn thing! and i loved it! OMG! i would have stopped writting it after like, 3 months. :p way to go, i give thee thumbs up and so much fucken porn. My eyes are just still proseccing it. WOW!. thats alota porn, i mena wow! i am still freacking aouit about it! WOW! PORN! LOTS! BRAIN OVER LAOD! okay i am going to end this now. Later oh great Lord Of Porn.

p.s

omfg thats a lota porn dude!

The best one shot of my life right here!

and trust me, ive been reading this stuff for years XD

Absolutly OUTSTANDING.

I can't wait to read more of your work X)

I have no words to describe how happy I am to have read that. I mean, you've rendered me speechless. Which doesn't quite happen very much.

All I can say is THAT. WAS. HOT.

Hope to read more fics like that. But I don't think any others I read tonight will top this one.

Happy writing!

-Kuno

good story

wow! loved it, awesome work

First of all, hot!

Secondly, AWWW! *pats eyes with hankercheif*

That was beautifiul! (I, like, just woke up afew minutes ago, so my grammer will be off. My vision keeps blurring)

Anways, wow! It was smutty as heck, yeah-but it still had a very good plot. I loved the potrayal of Roxas. Tee hee. I'm all one for sapiness with nicknames and petnames and such. I found it cute the way they would say 'Sweetheart' or 'babe'. It sounded natural for them as they talked.

Dear god

I wish I had a guy like Axel. Not many people would chase another person all over a foreign country with no knowledge of the language! Axel was a real sweetheart in this fic.

I'm sorry for the short review!

Keep on writing