wait what the fuck was happening

Sounds intresting but to be honest i dont understand what is going on

This story was kinda confusing, I think that there are some parts that were missing, for example I could not understand what happened to Ritsu or Mio at the end. you should expand and tell us Ritsu's side of the story. and the Dream was a bit confusing as well I could not figure out who was talking or who was thinking it didn't make sense.

Please update soon! :3

this is very interesting indeed. i'm not very analytical and nor am i sure i understand it fully, but i can sense the potential and probable depth it has. i'll be looking forward for more updates. :)

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I'm so sorry I couldn't understand your fic n_n'' gomen...