Awww this was lovely! Really enjoyed this one, it was super sweet and I read a fair bit of it today during a five and a half hour car ride. Thanks for posting!

God the whiplash of these past two chapters. Very intense, really enjoying this.

The WHIPLASH of that last sentence oh my god

Ugh this chapter was so good! My heart! I loved this scene between the two of them :)

I enjoy reading the various characterizations you have for Frex in each story :) cool to see you explore different ways for their relationship to improve or worsen depending on the themes of the fic

You're so good at writing? You right these characters so well, especially the sarcastic quips they exchange with each other that are both deadpanned and hilarious while also making my heart skip a beat. Also the way you write pining? My HEART. Especially Fiyero's pining. Also, I love this dumb idiot, forgetting how libraries work. What a champ. I had to take a break from this chapter like twice because I was grinning at my phone like an idiot and I needed to take a minute from my feelings.

You had me with the first few sentences. This fic INSTANTLY hit me in my heart, hard. The descriptions in this of Fiyero fidgeting in the library, describing his reactions to when she's around, how he feels, it's just really fantastic and has me already reading this with heart eyes. Something about him listening to her has me almost tearing up asdhfjgjjsfjj there's something weirdly soft and sweet about the action of paying attention to someone and listening to what they have to say. Great intro, just a wonderful way to start a fic. And I always love how you write Fiyero.

My favorite line I can remember (there were several) is “the plate never lies.”
I loved this whole story, once again you broke my heart and had me on the edge of my seat for hours and gave it a perfect ending with a perfect baby.

Princess Fae... *dies happy*

I see some Jewish and British monarchy traditions, that all seem insane and I like Fiyero’s idea for a private wedding

Boq my chill boi eating cake and basking in his friend’s happiness
I’m with Galinda though, I’d probably burst into tears
That was a beautiful proposal

“A loophole. Very nice. Elphaba’s going to kill you.” They certainly know her.
I love Fiyero going about it the traditional way, it’s very sweet

Elphaba is wallowing again but everyone is being supportive and loving and I love that
Galinda’s dream was funny but it also made sense

I’m a little sad Nessa and Boq broke up but I’m glad they stayed friends
I like how you write your supporting characters; they have their own little arcs but they aren’t distracting.

I love the elphaba defense squad and I want to join
Just surrounding Elphaba with love and acceptance is my new aesthetic