Still going strong, I see. Love it so far!

I laughed so hard when she fell out of the the tree and he found her! Great start to this story so far. Keep up the good work!

Omg this story was beautiful! Thank you for writing it! I loved that Odette was more strong willed. Ugh just thank you again.

I love the story so far, but you have a couple of grammatical mistakes that need fixing. I cannot stop reading, this is so good!

I think how there is a mix of both Swan Princess and the anime version of Swan lake in there, especially during the battle chapter.

I really liked this story. Good job!

I like you. you have no idea, I could go as far as saying I love you. but that sounds a little perverts even if I'm a girl. then that may sound gay, if your a girl, but trust me, I mean it only as a friend because you know what? I don't even care if this is poorly written or not (probably not) because I hate how Disney princesses just stand around and don't freaking do anything but wait for they're prince. all princesses should not be damsels in distress. I like you. and this story is now favorited! thank you so much for writing this!

YEAH! Odette's got some balls! (Figuratively speaking, that is. Heheh.) Way to not just stay put and let it take you!

Nice chapter, though I slightly wonder how this is different than the film... (I hope you don't find me nagging too much, if so, just say so and I will stop reviewing. All of this isn't meant to be a prick, but to point things out to you so you can improve your writing.)

I liked the chapter and the way this story is going! I like the way we get to know more about their youth, which was really only one song long in the film. :P
Just one thing:
"I was going to mount Snow but was unsure how to seeing it I would have to lift my dress. I knew I had done it in front of Derek once before but that dress was easy to mount in."
but I thought she settled for a
"After empting every last dress and petty coat of the trunk I decided on a simple dress that would be perfect to ride in."
So, wouldn't that include not having to show her legs?
And I think there were one or two grammar-/typo-errors, but that's something that can easily be fixed with a beta-reader.

"and shock my long dark brown hair out and" Should be "and shook my long blond hair out, and"
By the way, doesn't Derek have brown hair, not black? And Odette has purple eyes, not blue.
Other than that, looks like a promising story.

ohhhhhh, i read the whole thing in one night. It's lovely

I like this story!

I always thought Oddette could talk to Jean-bob and Speed because she was turned into a swan. You never mention them again. Poor Jean-Bob and Speed.