| Reviews for Coming Back |
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  Guest chapter 17 . 1/25/2018 good but to short |
| Guest chapter 17 . 4/28/2017 good but to short need more storys with just Hermione and draco |
| Guest chapter 17 . 8/10/2015 Iaroputikodulamahaldiyahai |
 Weehoodle chapter 4 . 4/3/2014 This OCCness is absolutely absurd. Why do you write them OCC purposely and then tell us? Again not trying to hurt just giving advise. Maybe you could change the way they act a bit, Hermione wouldn't change schools that fast if she found out someone was cheating on her. And Harry isn't a lying arrogant cheater. So... Maybe you could give some more backstory? I think you should get a beta to help you make this story better. I could help you if you want or you could look one up that is very good at writing Harry Potter stories with Hermione and Dumbledore in them. |
| Weehoodle chapter 3 . 4/3/2014 Why does Malfoy care about Hermione sooooo much? Why did you drop the F-bomb? That was very unnecessary. In England the F-word is not as bad as it is in the US. They have some different swear words. |
| Weehoodle chapter 1 . 4/3/2014 What? Why would Prof, Dumbledore let her go just like that with no explanation? And why is everyone so OOC? I really hope I don't hurt your feelings but this needs to be fixed. |
| Guest chapter 9 . 3/5/2014 Harry did! Harry sent the letter and the rose! |
| Blackwidow99 chapter 17 . 11/27/2013 NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO KEEP GOING. Your revised version is only 2 chappies KEEP GOING |
| Nyphadora.M.G chapter 16 . 8/13/2012 Write More! It's really good! I want to know how it ends! :) :) ;) |
| LADYHINATA23 chapter 19 . 3/15/2012 I love it! Pretty plz write more! |
| Light Demon 15 chapter 19 . 3/6/2012 OH MY GOD! Never knew you had it in you girl! WOOT WOOT! |
| salty fry chapter 19 . 3/2/2012 I liked it, thought it was a bit ... little ... A LOT ... of well (I am not even gonna say it) Their are way more descriptive things out their I just never thought you would write things like it. -sal-ta FRY! |
| missmollymundt chapter 19 . 2/29/2012 I love how creepy and delusional Harry is! It just makes disliking him easier! I loved it! Please update ASAP! |
| Ravenclaw Rules 16 chapter 19 . 2/29/2012 short but i loved it. still hate harry and you're right you did make him creepy. oh well |
| Ravenclaw Rules 16 chapter 17 . 2/29/2012 i think Karla and Seamus would kinda look cute together, maybe its all up to you actually oh and can you add some Dean Yasmin interaction please |
