This does sound like Logan's reasoning and was gut-wrenchingly truthful to his psychotic jackassery. It's a good thing Veronica really can't read minds because if she ever got a whiff of how he was thinking, she would never trust him or let him within ten feet of her. I'd love to read his thoughts once the kiss on the balcony at Camelot comes about; or hell, why he saves her from 21 Jumpstreet to begin with. Thanks for a great one-shot.

I really loved this. I thought that it was amazingly written, and it totally felt like Logan. I felt that it was incredibly realistic. I loved it!

A very good look at Logan and his thought process. Thank you for sharing.

love it! hope you continue..i love season one stuff and there isnt too much out there!

This story makes me ache! Wow! Some tremendous writing!

Lovely. You got a very good handle on pre-series Logan.

Really honest writing. Good job.

Thoroughly superb. Great writing. I loved the inclusion of his thoughts inside of the parentheses. You nailed his voice perfectly. I felt his bitterness and his grief at every moment. Really good job. It's interesting to see so many canon events from Logan's perspective, especially pre-series stuff.

Yay!