Interesting

Man, I hate sad endings, but damn this was a great story. Great job!

Loved it! But most defiantly needs a sequel! please! x

This was soo good :D what a great story absolutely loved it :P

no.

... ... ... ... This is not the happy ending I was expecting. This ending was bittersweet, unexpected, and a total joy nonetheless. Thank you so much for writing this frankly amazing story.

Raxi

Okay, I'm crying.
This was so good, but so sad.

what the...? YOU DIDN'T! AW HELLO NO! THEY ARE MEANT TO BE! WHY DID YOU HAVE TO BREAK MY HEART AND THEIRS OMG! ;;

Wow! That was amazing!

I know I've told you how good you are in other chapters, but since this was the last one, I had to reiterate it, and I hope you believe me. I always mean what I say in my reviews, and you are totally one of my faves now.

Thank you for the emotional roller coaster that was this story. :D

I can only hope the other person's sequel is even HALF this good , , , :D

Now I'm crying and shaking.

I actually liked the way you wrote this chapter. It wasn't long and drawn out and yet it wasn't so short that it seemed, no pun intended, forced either. It was just the way it should have been, and I could see Jim actually this way.

You are an amazing writer . . .

You have just officially made me cry and my hands are sweaty and my stomach is nervous.

But I still can't stop reading . . . won't stop reading. It has become a compulsion now.

Oh wow.

You've written the love between these guys so incredibly well.

I know what's coming and you've already broken my heart. Sigh.

Wow. I was going to wait until I got to the end to review/compliment this, but I can't.

I have to say this is amazing. I love the plot and the premise; John working for Moriarty is an amazing thought and getting caught in love with Sherlock, though the rape thing kind of threw me. I'm not looking forward to that scene, but I can't stop reading this story either.

Your characterization is good and the pacing is absolutely excellent. I've even re-read some scenes so I don't miss out on any of the nuances in it . . .

I actually had to come looking for this story because of the sequel someone else wrote, and I am SO glad I did!

THAT
IS
NOT
AN
ENDING!
that... just... NO!
nonononononononono

You're like Moffat. Crushing hopes and dreams, but in a good way. Gah, my tears. I love the story! It's so sad!

Xela