That was awesome! The fight scene in the beginning was epic and definitely had all the feel of a climactic showdown at the end of each episode. Plus, we got the added bonus of DaddyBats coming to the rescue. :) Great story!

Cool!

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I like the ones shot, it's well written. My only problem with it is that I can't find any connection with the summary to the plot, also, it lacks an actual plot.

aw.

Loved this! Thanks for the great writing :D

Theres alot of repetition but not bad all around. Keep at it.

I have never been more uncomfortable in my life. The excruciating details in which you described children getting hurt made me think of the hunger games. I dub this 50 Shades of Young Justice.

Hahaha I love the last part: "fully intending to ask Robin where the hell he got those sticks and who taught him how to use them" Awesome :)

:3 Wally is so sweet! love the little moment between them.
love the rest of the fic too! :D
And I'm really in love with the hint toward Nightwing

Hahaha that was so funny, that last line where did he get those sticks... He used them on yj and it was totally awesome

XD I luves it!

hahahha! i love that last sentence! you gotta love Wally~ great story by the way, it was really good :)

wait...where is Artemis?

charming. extremely charming. wow, this is AMAZING! why is it m? they're not as bad as some stuff i've read...i noticed you pulled the rating down to t. good. anyway, this is just vividly written. i've definitely gotten inspiration from this. thanks for recommending it, and great writing! i'll send you the chapter once i'm finished, which shouldn't be too long...or it'll be after next week, cuz of EOGs...EEPERS! i could totally imagine this in my head, awesome job!