Reviews for Fetal Position
Flameear chapter 5 . 1/2/2013
Well almost two years since an update... idk write more if you can
Minxica chapter 5 . 10/13/2012
I think you did a great job on Nny. It seemed like it was really him. love the story so far!
Cindy Cerberus chapter 4 . 3/27/2012
Why wont you write more! I need more!
Hawkbelly chapter 5 . 2/9/2012
SQUEAL! AWESOME. I must have more, if you please?
Cindy Cerberus chapter 5 . 12/19/2011
It was great! Please write more.
Lily the Master of Kitties chapter 5 . 12/1/2011
This is really good. Phobias are such interesting things. I just want to say that I like your story very much. Thank you for writing this, and please update! ;_;
Pluto the ninth chapter 5 . 9/22/2011
I believe you misunderstand the idea of Nny. He is not a very complex person other than his likes and dislikes. Irrational anger is a part of his being and ironically he wants to be treated, not with respect, but like a person in his definition. His physiological profile suggests that he simply wants to go about his life only being answered or talked about when he starts a conversation or asks a question. It is in my opinion that he would like to go about his life as if he weren’t there at all.

It is only when he goes through a mentally feeble trip that he becomes murderous and overall hateful of his ‘antagonists’ portrayed in humanity as a whole. This trip is often mistaken for a split personality that Nny cannot have for many reasons. During these trips his mind sees everyone as judging him or hurting him knowingly\or unknowingly and this is caused by a cloud of hatred and anger that protects his mind. Obviously there are also hints of self-consciousness as he fears and despises being judged more than anything in this world.

I have no idea if you plan to continue this story but I sincerely hope this helps. I am sorry to say that Nny is not a complicated person, but he is irrational on many different levels for many different reasons. This makes him a very unpredictable character to write. If you continue then I look forward to reading it.

Sincerely and with my Humble Respects,

-The Guilty Bytander
blackcherrynuke chapter 5 . 8/27/2011
write more write more dont leave me hangin imn as giddy as a school girl now plz write more
notactive616 chapter 5 . 6/25/2011
Wow! I really liked reading that! I'm not exactly sure what but something about really kept me wantin to read more! I think it was your writing style... Well what ever it is I hope that you update soon! :3
ZahvayTheFallen chapter 4 . 3/9/2011
Gaaawd, I love this fic soo much! I'm so excited every time it updates!
Mistyclaw9 chapter 3 . 2/27/2011
Good! :D
Meep chapter 2 . 2/21/2011
Fantasic,

moar plz :D
ZahvayTheFallen chapter 2 . 2/15/2011
Still watching your story!

Anyways, this chapter was a bit short, and confusing. Did her fear of crowds always exist or is she just paranoid?

Oh, well, you're only two chapters in- things will probably be better explained as the story continues.

Johnny is very in-character, and I like it a lot.
Mistyclaw9 chapter 2 . 2/15/2011
Sorry, i was to lazy to log in. This story is great!
randomperson chapter 2 . 2/14/2011
this is awsome. and if you run out of phobias, give her hippopoto-monstroses-quipedalio-phobia!
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