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Guest chapter 83 . 5/3 From Chapter 47: Skyfire's troublemaking grin was lit by starlight. "And with opposite Spark-coding." "Meaning . . . a femme's Spark and a mech's Spark are needed? Or two completely neutral-coded Sparks?" From this chapter: "Prowl and Jazz?" "And between Soundwave and Blaster What about Ratchet and Wheeljack as Creators?" the twin Lord Protectorates and Bluestreak Either you've completely forgotten previously established rules of your own worldbuilding (entirely possible, given the massive 380k words across eight years of writing), or you've picked a bunch of test subject who're going to give you the absolute worst results. |
Mr. Chaos chapter 84 . 1/16 I have truly, truly enjoyed this fic and the world you have created. The ability to tell your story within the movie canon universe (at leas the firs three films with the other 2 being an alternate universe) has been a utter blast. About the only thing I wish you would have done more of was describe some of the new bots more, so I could get a better visual of them. For example, I my mind Prowl has a form similar to TLK Barricade but I imagine that isn't how you see him. Would love to know how you envision the non-movie characters |
icanhascamaro chapter 9 . 1/7 I really want to read this but I can’t get past how you misspelled Mikaela’s name. It’s Mikaela, not Mikayla. I’m sorry but it’s a HUGE difference. I mean, unless Sam is dating a different girl named Mikayla? Don’t hate, but I’m not fond of the nickname either. Makes me think of that old song “on Mikki he’s so fine...” and I can’t get past Mikki as being a guy’s name, lol. |
Dragon Dagger chapter 84 . 1/3 This was an absolutely fantastic ride! You did an awesome job. I thank you from the bottom of my heart for this alternate look into a world that I have been watching and enjoying since i was a child (Watched the original Transformers cartoons when they came out). I think you found a fantastic way to close out the story as well! I will keep a light eye on you for other fics that I may enjoy as You have a very good writing style that is easy to read and fun to watch as the imagination plays the movie in my head. I wish you the best of luck in your future endeavors and hope that you find peace and a balance in life that allows you to enjoy what you love doing. ~Dragon Dagger |
Unca Bob chapter 84 . 1/1 End of an era. See you on AO3! |
What Lies Beyond chapter 11 . 12/31/2019 Ooh, Abney Park... Good choice, that. 'Too Far to Turn Back' fits well, like you said, but the band's got a way with storytelling as is. One can draw quite a bit of inspiration and introspection from their music... Still, an excellent fic so far-I know it's been up for years, but somehow I'm only now getting a chance to read it. Keep up the great work! |
Crystalstorm chapter 84 . 12/30/2019 This was well written and fun to read. Worth the read and had me always waiting for more. Sadly for me..any fic you post on AO3 will most likely be unread. For some reason I have been unable to use the site on any device in my home for more than a month now...So until whatever is causing that (its not due to my internet, they checked it for me through the company) is fixed..I won't get to read your new updates. No matter how much I would enjoy them. Ja ne. |
Moony.R.J.Lupin chapter 84 . 12/30/2019 ahhhhhhhh! woke up to the rest of the conversation on discord to see that there was a chappie up! (this is NotLexLuthor btw) was so excited! and you definitely did not disappoint, this is an absolutely AMAZING end to an even more AMAZING fic, well done you! congrats and thank you so much for this monster of a fic! (i'll also be putting this on Ao3) |
AyameKitsune chapter 84 . 12/30/2019 Epic! I can’t wait to see what happens next! |
Sarai chapter 84 . 12/30/2019 I like it; however I don't get the secret. |
HogHugs chapter 84 . 12/30/2019 Wow. Monster fic achieved, very well done. This fic is masterful, answering the questions you proposed at the start of the fic and beyond, and the world you built here explodes with the creativity, research and effort you brought here, so such so that really want to live in this world (hopefully after everything calmed down). Even if it wasn't the main focus of it, this also has some great character moments, between fellow cybertronians and humans alike. Even the way you balanced a large cast of characters to make the world feel expansive, while focusing on a common core of characters to deeply develop details from. Getting to hear and know about the characters that weaves together their origins and how they came to work with each other brings the same sense of wonder I imagine the characters felt learning about it. Damn writting down all these thoughts is so scattershot since it's just so damn good! Thanks for dedicating eight years to writing this, naturally coming to the end of such an odyssey brings emotions, and I'm just the reader. I feel, like the characters now, there will be more exciting things to come. And, as the humans and cybertronians in the fic have learned or will come to learn, there is more to all of them than meets the eye (did that sound forced, srry :( ). THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS FIC, CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT IS IN STORE p.s you're a legend |
1Timberwolf chapter 84 . 12/30/2019 What a fantastic ending. I loved this story from the very beginning and can't wait to see you on AO3. |
AshesGleamandGlow chapter 83 . 9/22/2019 Dang. That was a good story. AND IT'S NOT EVEN FINISHED YET WHY DO I DO THIS TO MYSELF UGGGH. Thank you so much for this, it's been such a bright spot in my life for the past four days, three of which I've spent dealing with the consequences my own stupidity. Wishing you my support as a fellow author and sufferer of the human condition! The Younger Half of AshesGleamandGlow |
anne623 chapter 83 . 9/18/2019 Shit! You've created a monster fic. You got me hooked to this. I swear I fell in love with your story. You've created a fix-it story to make up with the canon events, in which many died. You are awesome as an author for this. |
Uta's Waifu chapter 83 . 8/24/2019 I've read this countless times and each time, I fall more and more in love with the story, beginning to end. Thank you for writing this. Take your time with updates. I can wait. My imagination has been teased and appeased. This is perfection. |