I really enjoyed this - lovely piece of writing. I hope you got good marks for it. :)

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So lovely! Hope you professor liked it!

Lovely work D

Awww, that's a brilliant piece of writing :D

Gem x

Hope you got a big gold star from teacher! Painful to read ('nothing better to do'...ouch!), but again beautifully done.

Great job! Hope you got top marks on this and your prof didn know you were thinking of Spooks ;)

Beautiful.

"Please, just tell me what I should do. I'd do anything to make you happy, you know that."

Again she shook her head. "You don't need to do anything. I just need time. That's all I need."

Just wonderful and so like them.

That was beautiful! I hope you got a good grade on it. :) you deserve it. Lovely work. Thanks for sharing.

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That was beautiful.

It could actually be the missing scene leading up to the proposal and would explain why Ruth rejected him because she'd already asked for time.

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This should have been the opening scene not Ros' funeral. Lovely and very in character.