Oh my gosh, this is so painful!

(Also, hell to the yes. The wrench is a visual gag and I ain't one of the haters!)

These were amazing. Your stream-of-consciousness ones (if that's what they are) have a lot of run on sentences, but in a way I think that makes them more powerful. It did sometimes feel like my inner voice was running out of breath while I was reading them, but since that's impossible, no worries.

I stared at the title of chapter three for an agonizingly long time, by the way, hearing the line in my head and going, "Which damn Shinedown song is that from?!" For some reason my first thought was "Call Me", but then I finally identified it... only to have it credited at the end. So I could have just kept reading and not had to be agonized. But then I wouldn't have had that little sense of triumph. So pros and cons and all that.

Yeah, anyway... Brilliant job. :]

This had me reduced to a girly, wibbly mess. Beautifully done, understated, poetic.

This was so great! Thanks for sharing it )

~lilah

Beautiful ending to this!

I would believe Winry wasn't sure if Ed could keep his promise and whether she could keep her promise to him, as well.

Oh, awwwww! No, I like this one the way it is!

Oh, Winry. You poor, poor thing.

That last line in the first chapter is a killer.

I love this! And I'm glad you finished it, I really like this last one.

Aw. This made me cry. I like to pretend the entire first anime just didnt happen cause of how they ended it. Such a drop off. And then when the movie came out I was all excited and they end up doing practically the exact same thing. Ohwell, these are good (: