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Jimmy way to go now hanging myself just sounds terrible. lol can't wait for next update. so much to read its like reading 10 stories at once and I LOVE IT! Plus a super smart Cosmo. Cosmo is great in every way ooo look a nickel!

Another great chapter.

Im still having fun but I do hope Timmy finds someone to fill the gap in his heart. It hurts even when the break up is mutual…

So many side stories going! It's like a buffet line! If Poof leaves Betty, does that mean Betty goes back to Retroville with Daddy Jimmy? Or does she hook up with Rocky? Keep going, man!

great chapter.

Been waiting soooo long for an update! Seems to be getting farther and farther apart! Who exactly are these intruders trying to steal Poof away from Betty? Jorgen did mention that someone on the Fairy Council was opposed to their friendship, but there's only supposed to be four members total, which leaves these guys fakes!

YAY update! Foop will not be pleased with this development. so much is going on in this story it is amazing. I wonder what Timmy is doing at this moment. Veronica going to hang herself? NOOOOOO! she is one of my fav characters in FOP she has the whole Helga G Pataki vibe going for her. Crazy but adorable and in need of a will Trixie do? will Lia fix the computers and save the company? will Poof fall for the councils tricks? Will Betty get to sleep with him? will she have a happily ever after? Will Cosmo ever find Phillip? will Vicki and Timmy just get a room and start going out? will I ever stop asking question?

yo i tried finding Mistressofthepen1987 but somehow i can't i'll try over google now but if that doesn't work could you send me a link?

the 3 rules of robotics are a lie just like the cake and the spoon. I like Veronica she was always the one I thought needed more back-story. She needs an episode focusing on her. If she went broke and had to be friends with Timmy and his group of friends become a better person then to restore the status quo have her family bounce back and her go back to acting stuck up cuz she isn't confident enough to be herself. Kinda like what they did with Trixie in "The boy who would be Queen" at the end she showed she cared but still stuck with what people thought of her. Wow i went on a rant didn't I? Well this chapter was nice Rocket is up to something he may be EVIL or he likes to play the field. Ha sports joke. Either way it will not end well. Timmy nothing will ever happen unless you man up and go for it. Jimmy you could be super liked if you were not sure a Jerk! That part reminded me of Mansam from Toriko. Did you just call me handsome?

I enjoy this story, but it seems your interval between chapters has been growing lately! It's become very complex since you decided to create alternate endings where Timmy ends up with a different girl. I can safely assume Betty, Cindy, and Libby are not among them, but I could be wrong! Still, I hope you continue to the very end. Carry on.

Another great chapter.

Also if Timmy only ends up with only one of them in the end I kinda like Trixie or Vicki best so far but him ending up with more then one would be nice too.