I love this story sooo much! Please update whenever you can!

Just found this fic and decided to binge read it. It had me hooked. :) Hope you are doing well.

Lol it’s almost been 3 years
And here I am, rereading it again

I absolutely love this story and I always wish it gets updated :"(
Can't wait to know what'll happen next!
Beautifully written 3

It's a cute story, and kakashi somehow really cute here instead of being fearsome shinobi. I love reading sweet side of Jiraiya toward kakashi too. However;

1) Kakashi being 14 and a genius but couldn't read and write is questionable - although not entirely impossible - just how could he graduate from academy if he couldn't read? To be a genin, first you have to attend & graduate from academy.

2) point above, Biwako-sama still alive, Tsunade, Shizune & Jiraiya affection toward Kakashi is actually fine. Let's think it as your AU

3) Your fic lack of conversations, especially the first 6 chapters. I found myself skimming those chapters. It's actually getting better after chapter 7, but to write one character's dialogue into one whole paragraph is just too much. Try to break them into few short paragraphs.

4) the way you use honorifics seemed a bit off. Not entirely wrong, but not sounds right either. Like Biwako-san. She's sandaime's wife that should grants her more respect especially if that from her husband's former students. For a close friend &peers like Jiraiya & Tsunade, it didn't necessary to use honorific to call someone. Or for a senior to junior, Kakashi never call Naruto with honorifics. But it's also common use if they have special attachment. For example; Fukasaku-sama called Jiraiya-chan because he was his pupil, Sakura called Sasuke-kun & Hinata infamous speech 'Naruto-kun', it's because they like the boys.

Gee... when I read your stories, it's like you can read my mind or something! XD
The explanation for why choosing wolf instead of dog... I love it! xD It's perfectly reasonable and kind of poetic... you and your spot-on imagery!

I waited until now to review. I just found your story only a few days ago. And have been reading each day. (Except for a three day break) I must say this. Kakashi is wonderful in this story. I really feel like this is exactly the way he would truly behave. If the manga portrayal of his life had gone this way from the fanfic.

The thing that most sticks with me is Kakashi's loyalty. He never deserts the people he cares about. They are all important to him to such a degree that is truly honorable. The promises that are made he intends to keep. And gives everything he has and more to achieve them. For the very people he cares about. This trait shows itself the strongest in regards to Naruto. I have been reading fics with Kakashi taking on the task of raising Naruto. And though they are good. I have to admit that your Kakashi takes this to wonderful level. His love for the infant is as strong as a new mother's. Maybe even stronger than that. It was truly what amazed me. Though I imagine that this story will mostly be about just Kakashi growing up. (And believe me this is an exciting tale) I hope to see in the future more of that bond between Kakashi and Naruto like father and son or even as gentle aniki with his precious otouto.

Excellent writing! Hope you can bring more of this wonderful story to us. But also here's a late congratulations too you!

Looking forward to more :)

Thank you very much for the update! I'm happy to see a new chapter

Woah! A lot happened to you! Congratulations on your marriage! (and I hope your previous partner learnt their lesson)

I wish you happiness and good luck!

WOOHOO! You updated :D I love the way you write my favourite characters (Jiraiya and Kakashi) and the OC's are very believable and well written too! *gets on knees* please don't leave it that long again.
I believe that everything in life happens for a reason, the good and the bad. It's good to hear you've come out of a bad stretch into a good one and I wish you much happiness xx

Please dont take another 3 years! I enjoy your stpry too much!

I hope now that you're back, you can continue this story again until the end.
Just so you know that this story is amazing and I LOVE IT VERY MUCH!

I am so happy you updated :) though I literally just found this story yesterday and read it for the first time I am happy to see that you are going to continue with it! Can't wait to read more!

I loved the parallels you drew between the arts of swordsmanship and calligraphy!

I'm truly sorry that happened :( I believe that everything happens for a reason since if that didn't happen you wouldn't have met this new wonderful man and would have stayed with that cheating #*& $! He didn't deserve you!

Anyway about the fanfic I'm happy you came back :) I was shocked when I saw an update but I didn't forget the story because it's that good! It's very rare that someone pays kakashi this way and I love it :D can't wait for the next chapter :)