I think chapter 3 might be better placed at the start, as I find it hard to read in Pulp Fiction style timelines!

And why were IAD giving Sara / Cath hard time ,for a kiss?

Hope more of this sooN!

R u gonna continue?

interesting story

Can't wait for more

*hint*hint*

interesting story. would love to read more so the confusion i have can be cleared up. post more soon.

I can't wait to see where you are going to take this story. It is definitely intriguing, and, of course, I want Sara to be okay and Cath and Sara to end up together. But, truly, that's all up to your imagination and storyline! ;)

~ Tai

Definitely seems like an interesting story. You are a talented writer and the pacing seems good, although it is a short chapter... would love to read more!

One sentence that confuses me: "Answer as truthfully as she could, and risk messing up the IA Investigation, or answer truthfully and mess up the IA Investigation." There are also some capitals in the middle of sentences in the last paragraph which I did not understand... maybe it was the autocorrect on your computer?

Overall really well written, so happy to see you writing again!

Super continuation. I like the way you keep it all suspense and the reader in the dark about what exactly happened. Can't wait to read more!

~ Tai

Wow. Super start. Will you continue this story? Would be wonderful to hear more of it.

~ Tai

This is great! I hope it turns into a real C/S fic... :)

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