O wow, Edwards so horrible!

I liked your Fanfiction a lot. The ending was unexpected, and for this reason even more appreciated. It was right. The right ending for Sarelle; the happy ending for her. I admit I shed a few tears for the end of the Sarelle of the Alternate Universe... but only because I am in eternal search for the happy ending; I imagined Sarelle UA could turn into energy and become a unique thing with Sarelle we know... this goodness, these sentimentalisms will kill me sooner or later! Ahahahaha!
Anyway, going back to the "what if" piece my mind is empty for interesting proposals. I thought of some "what if", but they are not very original:

"What if Sarelle instead of Carlisle met on her first trip the Denali sisters (and Sasha their creator) and her story towards Edward started from there?"

"What if Sarelle met Edward for the first time during his period of" rebellion "at Carlisle and vegetarian life?"

Your proposals, two of them are interesting:
"What if Sarelle had went back to the Volturi?" and "What if Bella had died in childbirth?" they are valid scenarios, and why not? They could both fall into one "what if": Sarelle returns to the Volturi, sacrifices her freedom and then Bella does not overcome the birth...

I'd really like to know what happens in the original world between Edward and Bella, and with Renesmee. What did Edward read in her mind that caused that crazy reaction? What happens to the Cullens in the end? And what about Bella?

I started the original book about two years ago and for some reason, I got distracted. There was a day that I remembered the book and I SEARCHED for this book everywhere, until I finally found it. I'm glad that I did that's for sure. I couldn't stop reading it was too good to put down. The story was so well written, I could slowly piece together what was supposed to happen and I loved that. Sarelle's story was wonderfully told. I'm glad I found this series! The ending was everything and more. I secretly wanted her and Aslo, but I knew that couldn't be. Thank you for this masterpiece. It was an enjoyable read.

Sad to see it end but pleased with the ending!

When I say I cried when I read this chapter, I really mean I sobbed and my dog looked at me like I was crazy. I don’t know if I’m happy or sad or happy and sad, but this is one of my favorite stories!

A beautiful ending. Thank you so much. Although, I'm super curious what happens in the other world. Eager to see Renesmee get what's coming. Never liked canon Bella or Renesmee at all. But what happens to Edward in the other world? I know we had that little glimpse, but I'd love to read more! Again, thank you so much. I really enjoyed your spin on things.

...this fanfic has left me speechless...in a “ I totally didn’t see this coming” sort of way.

this Story was absolutely amazing! Thank you for taking the time and effort to create this

that was absolutely beautiful. thank you for sharing Sarelle's story with us

Wait. How can her past self be dead yet the “original” is still alive?

I am confusion

Ugh Bella is the worst

This chapter was confusing af

A part of me ships Aslo and Sarelle more than Edward.