I. Love. This! Write more soon please! I can't wait for more!

I like the idea of Gary being Tavishs son and him being blind, those are good ideas. I think it leads to how Gary joined 141, as a son of Tavish but later becoming blind...I see stuff and just make it in my head, lol :D can't wait for an update for chapter 11!

Ahh I've been waiting for a update for like ever! Was not expecting Gary to have a kid! So far this one and the one where he is blind are my favorites, can't wait to see where you take this!

I really like this little collection of one shots you have going, but I would really like to see 2-5 added onto. 'Specally the 5th one, the thought of Gary being Tav's son is just way too cute!

its good plz update soon :D

AWWWWWW. Scared!Gary is so huggable and adorable...gah I wonder if Ghost will actually hurt him at some point D: nnng

Ahh please I love it all! I just need to know if you'll continue the segments where you left off! Please do!

muahahaha awesome! :D

I think you should do all those fifty things, but it would be nice if you finished one storyline before starting another. So far, I love them all :)

I loved this chapter! I noticed u asked at the end , recomendations of how you should do the chapters? Hmm you could have them broken and skipping around like they are, and continue where you left off in them in a separate story, personally I hope you just continue the segments u left off in cuz I don't know what's happened to blind Gary or shot Gary! It's intriguing really! But all in all I deffiantly like the way chapter four is going and hope it continues! Oh and if all of this is just wayyy off then don't mind me! :P

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I feel bad for Roach. D'awww poor Roach. 141 doesn't even know him anymore. In fact, he doesn't even know himself. I love the premise. This type of fics are awesome.

I LOVE IT. UPDATE ASAP you make the story so intriguing and plot twistfulness! Im always left guessing whats next. Your writing amazes me!

Oh I love it! I'm so glad you added more detail! It was a-maze-ing! This is probably my favorite payment so far but I would like to see the others. One that would proabably cool would be if he took his aligence. Somehow put him working for makerov? That'd be interesting... Whatever you do I'm sure it'll be awesome.

Though I'd love it if there was more detail and a little more careful structure. Also, you might want to fix your title. I think it's supposed to be "Where Are You Now"?

oh man i'm soooo glad you updated! amazing idea!