Both the ladies (well, if you could call Morrigan a lady) HAHAHAHAHAHA very nice one!

I think this is actually one of the few fanficts of this type I could read all the way through without having a jarring sense that it could never happen that way. To have it set up as a question of cold, and as something that still took some time, is fairly brilliant. Though the length makes it mainly smut, which is fine, it still keeps truer to the characters than some full length pieces I have read and shows how awkward it would all kind of be. Though I don't see Aeden quite in the same way, he can obviously change based on the PC and so the whole thing works without ringing untrue. Instead of finding myself annoyed with fanfiction I find myself making a mental note not to rip you off accidentally in the longer work I've been working out for some time. In short, well done.

Now WHY isn't there more slash between these two? Hahaha. This was lovely.

I love innocent!Alistair WAY too much :P

This was very cute, it got a little more interesting near the end but I really like this story (not just because of what they did lolz) I may just look at more of your stories. Keep up the good work.

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Once again, I kind of find myself wishing to be a guy JUST so I can do what's in your story. Yup. So that means your writing is good, just in case I'm ramblng...

And just in case Alistair might like to reward me with some more cheese, I'm in a Creamy Lancashire (woo!) mood. ;)

Finally some good Alistair/Cousland pwp! Loved how awkward alistair was good job!

Wonderful story can't wait for part two!