| Reviews for Grey Dawn |
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BlueRomaNtic chapter 20 . 7/12 I read everything in a night and I'm totally in love of your story, I'll wait as much as being necesary :) |
elizajane14 chapter 12 . 6/22 Legitimately love how you are writing Chase! It feels so accurate hahaha! |
elizajane14 chapter 11 . 6/22 Im really enjoying this story! I appreciate you taking it slow and not rushing through anything. This is really well written! |
Guest chapter 20 . 5/28 I adore this and ship them so much |
Atomitrox chapter 20 . 4/19 Well... that's ominous. Makes it look more like the Witch is responsible... Unless there's an M. Night Shyamalan twist in the making? |
Guest chapter 20 . 4/19 Ooooooh heck a cliff hangar! I really like this story, thank you for this chapter! |
Atomitrox chapter 19 . 4/11 The plot thickens. Eager to see where this goes and how/if the Witch is involved. |
Atomitrox chapter 1 . 4/7 Huh... was there meant to be a chapter 19 today? |
Atomitrox chapter 18 . 3/18 So, I decided to read this and I'm enjoying it thus far. I especially like the way you've written Owen where you've emphasized how he can turn off the charm in contrast to the abusive treatment. I do wish you fleshed out his history a little bit more, or at least the history of him and Akari dating. Harvest Moon characters don't have a whole lot of depth, so you can reasonably make anybody an antagonist, but I think it works better if we have more insight into what contributed to their fall. I am curious to see how the mystery turns out. I think I know the "who". Just not the "how" and "why". Keep it up! |
Professor of Gallifrey chapter 17 . 3/12 Oh no, don't leave it off there! I wanna know! |
Guest chapter 16 . 10/6/2019 I loved this chapter. Please update soon |
Ur2Cool chapter 15 . 2/23/2019 Oh man, I love your writing! You do such a great job of making the characters feel like living, breathing people, and it's so much fun to see the mystery slowly unravel :) thanks for the awesome update! |
Professor of Gallifrey chapter 15 . 2/13/2019 Oh my goodness, I am so happy you updated! I love the progress on the story! |
Chibidenryuu chapter 14 . 7/1/2018 like this story, hope, there will be a new chapter soon :) |
ModernQueenSerenity chapter 14 . 9/18/2017 Oh my gosh. I absolutely love everything about this story. As sad as it is, domestic violence awareness is a cause that resonates very very strongly with me. I even joined a sorority whose primary philanthropy is domestic violence awareness, education, and prevention. This story is incredibly written and it is so brace of you to take on such a heavy topic that not may people will talk about. You write about it in such an elegant manner, but it's still so informative to anyone who hasn't experienced it before. Please please keep it up. Im so anxiously awaiting to see how this will end. You are amazing! |