| Reviews for The Path To My Soul |
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   Perfect Chaotic Life chapter 37 . 4/12 Jasper was an ass. I get the point behind him leaving her behind, but he was being an ass about things. He basically abandoned her. Bella let him back in too easily. But I really love the story. |
| NegansGirl2020 chapter 34 . 10/8/2019 This is for chapter 16 part 2! I do love your story but it grates on me that they rely on Alice so much for every decision they make! Jasper left his mate because Alice said it would be fine! Yeah they all forgot that if Bella has her shield up Alice cant see her so how does she know it will all be fine! And that's no damn excuse to leave his mate! I really hate how they live through alice its ridiculous! |
| AliceCullen0629 chapter 37 . 10/1/2019 really good story |
| Kmpcarter chapter 3 . 7/31/2019 I think it is funny how you said this was supposed to be a One-Shot and it has 37 chapters and you think that is short. So far I'm enjoying the story I like Jasper and Bella together. |
| M.S.Carol chapter 32 . 7/18/2019 Well yeah he had to leave |
| M.S.Carol chapter 27 . 7/18/2019 Ummmm what? I’m conflicted but loving the ride |
| M.S.Carol chapter 21 . 7/17/2019 She is.. |
| M.S.Carol chapter 20 . 7/17/2019 It is its own special torture to not sleep I think |
| M.S.Carol chapter 19 . 7/17/2019 Are things going to go downhill for her ? |
| M.S.Carol chapter 18 . 7/17/2019 Awe. I don’t want them to suffer . |
| M.S.Carol chapter 8 . 7/17/2019 That is new |
| M.S.Carol chapter 5 . 7/17/2019 Who is she talking to? |
| M.S.Carol chapter 4 . 7/17/2019 Jake has a point |
| Cavelenare chapter 23 . 6/17/2019 What happened? This story was going so well and it totally fell off the cliff once you hit Part II. It’s like 2, separate stories by two authors. Ugh they’re no longer the same characters and they don’t seem to have either canon personalities or the personalities you introduced them with. There doesn’t seem to be any plot beyond sex now and I’m just terribly dissatisfied. So many things happening in part I that are unresolved. It’s making me anxious to read. And not in a good way. Will try one more chapter but I’m not hopeful. |
| celajwhitney chapter 8 . 4/30/2019 the big, bad warlord is afraid! |
