Really good story deserves a lot more attention than it’s gotten.

Not sure how I managed to miss this fic! I loved it so much. I was wondering about Padme, and how she was able to sense Luke. Has she become force sensitive after being pregnant with a pair of force sensitive children? After Anakin has touched her with the force? Has her force sensitivity been overlooked all this time? Ahhhh I need to know haha. Esp since they were talking about immortality and how Anakin refused to learn it because Padme wasn't force sensitive. Anyway, thanks for writing this!

I adore this! I cried and absolutely could not stop reading it! I wished this had happened... By the way, I live how you described the emotions...

This is one of the best alternate Star Wars stories that I have ever read! It was so good! I can't wait to read the sequel! Thank you for writing it!

Beautiful

love the story ,JESUS bless

I actually really dislike that Obi-Wan aired all Anakin's business to the little sulky brat. Why should he get hear the full story about Anakin? That should be Anakin's alone to disclose. Also, all this strict adherence to the infamous code makes the Jedi feel so much more like a cult. They are being indoctrinated from infancy to this code, they have no choice in whether or not they want the lifestyle and what happens if they choose to leave? Anakin's got a connected and well-off wife, others who leave would be left with no support, funds or possibly even recognized job skills. The old Republic Jedi order had reached a tipping point where they needed to adapt or die, and in your version here they are refusing to adapt.

It is very rare that i find fanfictios that are good. THis one is great

Hey Crow. I'm LilyBell's sister. Ive read this book before but I don't remember some of it and I don't remember there only being 35 chapters. I remember there being like 50 gazillion chapters...or maybe I'm thinking of a different fic. I can't remember the name but...good job on this book

Hey Crow. Remember me? I just wanted to say that I loved the book the first time I read it so Im reading it again. Love your work by the way.:] oh and BTW Im writing a fic called Linda's Life. its on Miss Literati.:] if you read it, hope you like it. keep up the good work:]:]:]

Pedme asked "did you hear that baby"?

Anakin got his wife's message. She was carrying their baby.

Pedme felt sick. She was throwing up constantly.

Pedme visited with her mom.

Pedme was hurting because he was leaving.