| Reviews for Shortcake |
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Bloodfreakk chapter 21 . 4/15 man, every nowthen I come back to re-read this fanficsomewhere deep in my heart, I hope that it's miraculously been updated, or better yet, completed). I wish this was a complete story. Author... if you're out there..? |
Guest chapter 21 . 3/31 PLEASE UPDATE THIS I WANNA SEE HOW SHORTCAKE-CHAN WILL ACT WHEN L DIESSSS :’) |
ThatBlueStrawberry chapter 21 . 9/29/2019 I almost didn't want to read the last few chapters because then it'd be OVER, and I didn't want that to happen. I did though, and this is seriously fantastic! It's so funny, and adorable 3 seriously this has to be one of my favorite Death Note fics! L and Noel's relationship seemed to grow naturally, and they were just so cute! The whole part with the Wammy boys was cute too, I was surprised about Mello's crush, but I laughed so much when Ryoko approved him XD I really really liked this fic |
Guest chapter 21 . 7/16/2019 This is soooooooo good T_T so cute and so funny, seriously.. pls update :3 |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2019 Please update! |
Rebecca chapter 21 . 7/16/2018 I so did not squeal ( I totally did) This is so cute and I Was grinning the entire time i was reading it! Please update soon, i can't wait to read more of this sweetness! XD |
Daughter of the Oceans chapter 21 . 5/25/2018 This is one of the best Death Note stories I've ever seen and the only one where I've busted out laughing more than three times almost every chapter. LOVE IT! |
Izumikii chapter 1 . 4/19/2018 Omg you had me forget that this was a death note story with Kira on the loose and I totally didn’t see her asking his name leading to that XD |
Dav009 chapter 21 . 3/24/2018 Does a golden story I really hope you update soon |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/13/2018 I read this fic back when it was first published up into the last chapter. im forever wishing you’d update it. |
Anaritea chapter 1 . 2/7/2018 OKIE DOKIE HERE I GO aight even if this is like a super duper old fic, I'm just gonna flat out say it,, L actually has eyebrows in the manga and it's actually the best thing that had blessed mankind |
Guest chapter 21 . 2/5/2018 Aw! This is such a cute story! ️ I like how you don’t try to romanticise all elements of the story (e.g appearances and Ls reactions to things) it way more realistic and so much more sweet because of it! |
BlueGrey chapter 21 . 1/8/2018 Oh the things I'd give, the things I'd do, for this story to continue again... |
xela521 chapter 13 . 11/8/2017 Oh shit! I was in class in a middle of a test when i read that part where sbe called near white out and i busted out laughing and i tried to stop but it only got worse i got sent to the principle and my phone was taken up. I had to pay 15 dollars and got a zero on the test. XD worth it |
lunamoon531 chapter 21 . 8/31/2017 Someone's jealous~~ I see that this fic has not been updated since 2011 but I hope that you will one day continue it :3 |