I may be a little late to review, but this is gorgeous work. Really, almost . . . too brutally beautiful.

wow - that was awesome. a battle scenethis long could have been so boring but this was really descriptive. I think it was almost poetry. i usually try and say something bad so that I dont soun dlike praise praise praise but i dont think this need correction. The vocab was awesome and you described everything in detail without getting boring. well done man.

intense..i really got a good look into his head.. and well..i just love mika-chan and lucifer!*smiles*

sley

Cool. There's something about this Michael that bust my gut, in a way that's just... ow. He's beautiful, the way you've captured him. Good work!

I think the title may need tweaking. Sorry to be blunt about this, though, everything else was really great. I nearly skipped over the fic because of the title.

I like this - you do a much better job of Michael characterization than most people. It's nice to seem him not turned into a girl or someone's self-insert. Lucifer seems a little bit warm (he always seemed slightly inscrutable to me), but most of his motivation seems intact.

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That was GREAT! I really like it. Please continue.

Well- that was interesting! IT WAS GOOD! WELL WRITTEN I LOVED IT...just...I don't like both of them...i don't want either of them dead...*cries*