Wow, read the first comment. Rude dude, if you want to critize, at least leave an account for an answer. Anyways, ready to start reading, thanks for bringing content to this page, and Hope its good!

Wow, are you dyslexic, illiterate or do you just never bother to read what you've typed? Only your creativity is stopping me from ditching this story, I feel sorry for whoever decides to become your Beta. Me? I'd probably start foaming at the mouth and plotting your 'accidental' demise the first time you sent me a chapter to fix.

Learn the difference between things like your and you're so you don't look like an uneducated cretin. After that learn to type blind so you can see your mistakes on-screen while you're making them. After that, use a text-to-speech program so you can listen for any further mistakes. Then and only then should you submit your chapter to whomever you sucker into being your Beta.

If I, a dyslexic who taught himself to write English can do it, then so can you!

Great story so far though, you've got the creativity, now you just need to learn how to write your thoughts down without driving Grammar-Nazis to suicide and/or homicide.

To copy using sharingan the jutsu must have hand seals do he can't copy the rasengan and he likely wouldnt bother learning even if he knew the steps to learn it because sasuke wants quick easy power and while the rasengan is powerful it takes years for someone to master it and its only an A rank jutsu it would be easier for him to learn ones with handseals using the sharigan rather then learn rasengan.

For the shadow clones it was stated multiple times in the anime how chakra intensive it is as a jutsu not sure if it was said infront of sasuke but after he gets the sharingan its unlikely that kakashi despite being lazy would not warn him about the dangers of it also the jutsu is mainly used for recon and is near useless in a fight due to how easily dispelled it is unless u have unnaturally large reserves like naruto and even then there are better techniques to use in a fight so why waste chakra on a intensive jutsu that gets dispelled if hit once

Ok...my only real complaint here is you having Sasuke throwing b and c rank as well as an a rank jutsu around like he is a seasoned jonin as well as having his Sharingan active at the same time. At some point he should have hit the chakra wall hard because you have Sasuke's mentality set to Uber pompous and exceedingly dumb. Consistency my friend. Otherwise I m being entertained. You might want to consider going back and updating your story for spelling and grammar mistakes, but otherwise good job thus far.

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While I understand that Isaribi was for comic relief... She did commit assault and battery over being angry. The The theft and destruction of the book was a minor crime, but still a crime. As a guy who survived domestic abuse, I look down on that humor if taken too far. Which I believe you did. Saumi was justified, because she was in the exam and the guys had ill intent. Just my two cents...

thats how they met gaara?

The rasengan has no hand signs. You need to go through the whole thing. And also, only certain people can use rasengan. Naruto and 4th homage are one of them. It's not a jutsu fit for Sasuke, and Sasuke is second rate anyway

The instant I read Aura Sphere my mind automatically defaulted to pokemon because I'm trying to complete the pokedex right now, lots of references in this story

Red Fern, dear kami I actually read the book that's a reference to and that is a PERFECT spot for it nice!

I think you misspelled Dolores last name, its not Umbridge its Umbitch(Harry Potter fans will know why!)

Lots of grammar mistakes throughout this story, kinda feels unpolished. But this new one bothers me for some reason... The name is 'Hashirama' and not 'Hashimaru'... -_-

Still reading, but could be so much better...

So for future reference since I know this is completed; when having characters speak, always have right after it the one that spoke.
I.e.
"Hello" Naruto said.

You have...
Naruto looked at Haku.
"Hello" Haku blushed.
It makes us think Haku spoke, but she didn't. Because right after that, she says something.

wtf bruh

Holy shit, this is fucking awful.

Has been goin GREAT so far im on chapter 16 rn. Amazing work.