This was brilliant and I can't wait to read the other things on here! Great idea and all of you are writing geniuses!

Yes! I like this new development of Katie and Effy playing the Game! This just keeps getting better and better and each writer has been doing an amazing job :D

Yes! I love Cook! I like how we are starting to run into the other favorite characters :]

Yes! KFF and Effy! the only way to improve an already great Emily and Naomi fic is to add Katie and Effy!

haha they keep underestimating one another! this is going to get interesting very quickly!

Back to cat and mouse...I can't wait to see who ends up in charge again. I think Emily is winning this so far, time for Naomi to up her game! I like how you used a spot they would both think of to meet up again, and a place they both have history at together keeps this on the "realistic" side of things too.

I have to say Hypes that you have always been one of my favorite authors so I'm already a bit biased! but this chapter took the game to a whole new level and I love it :D I thought Naomi was screwed once the bouncers got her but Emily came to the rescue (and even if the title of the chapter didn't label you as the author I think the handcuffs would've given you away! haha you use them a lot). And now Naomi is drugged up and on the run...this game just got real!

I really like how each chapter jumps to the other persons POV, whoever had that idea - 20points for you! cause it was a great idea and really helps you get the hunter/hunted feeling! And that jerk who wouldn't leave Naomi alone totally deserved that but I'm wondering now...if she gets kicked out for violence how does the game work then?

I like how you kept the same pace as the previous chapter and it had the same type of feeling to it, the adrenaline pumping type feeling that they must be feeling at that club. Also I like this rule they have to ensure they both put effort into the game! makes things more interesting when you know they want to let the other person win in the end but are still going to make it hard on them

I wasn't sure how having so many writers (no matter how brilliant and talented you all are) on one story was going to work. I like the idea of you each getting your own chapter and playing off the previous authors work though. I think it also fits with the idea of this game Emily and Naomi play, a cat and mouse type feel to it, and fits your Predator and Prey name as well. Great intro to this, I'm intrigued already!

Brilliant! I know all good things come to an end, and this was certainly a great thing. Nevertheless other good things can take their place. I think it's time for a new one. I want to read more..

Beautiful chapter! All Hail to the master...

I love love love what you did with 'choices'; it's always something I've thought about and that was beautifully and eloquently explained.

Damn close to perfection itself! *slow clap*

I don't know why but I loved the line "just enough to get the taste of Naomi back in her mouth". Great work as always.

Welcome to the game Katie!

Interesting spin. It wasn't Katie in my mind's eye. But I respect anyone who can sway me to the Keffy bandwagon. I didn't used to be a believer, but lately I think I might buy a multipass.