Reviews for Acacia Lily Yarrow Coin: Jabberjay
Stephykins18 chapter 3 . 4/15/2014
I feel so bad for Acacia she's been through so much her whole life and now the Capital is torturing her and Ethan for kicks! Oh and poor Alwin him and Acacia love and need each other, they belong together! AH! Ethan whimpered Alyssa's name, I wonder if its cause he really does like her? I really love these stories great job! :)
Stephykins18 chapter 2 . 4/15/2014
OMG NO! Ace and Ethan were supposed to make it out not go into the Hunger Games! :O Damn this is great though I gotta admit! Oh and I loved when Mary Ana said "You have to believe in something or you don't stand for anything." That's an amazing quote!3 :)
Stephykins18 chapter 1 . 4/15/2014
EEP rescue mission! Oh yeah so far so good, now they just gotta hightail it out of there and fast! :) love it!
Mockingjay272 chapter 48 . 5/5/2013
YAY! I just finished the last few chapters and LOVED them. I can't believe the series is over... but it was so well written! I loved every second of it. I was so upset when you killed off Odysseus, but it was really sweet that Aca and Alwin named their son after him. ETHAN AND ALYSSA! Like I've said, I've always loved Ethan, he was probably my favorite characters, and I'm so happy he got together with Alyssa and that he'll be able to speak again. And you used Bridgette! Haha, SUCCESS! I can't wait for Rocking the Bottles, and I hope to see your SYOT up and running again soon. Thank you for the wonderful Acacia Lily Yarrow series, because they were so much fun to read!

Mock
Guest chapter 2 . 7/28/2012
AMAZING! i cant wait to see what happens
Goode's-girl-the-mockingjay chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
Oh. My. Gosh! Please please please update soon I need to know what happens to Ethan! Does he live? Does he die? Does he go into a coma from which he might never return? :D you are and amazing author and don't let anyone tell you other wise. Your fanfics are my favourites by far :) I haven't been able to stop reading them! Congrats on college that's so exciting!
TeamGaleSoIGetPeeta chapter 43 . 4/2/2012
Aw you missed me? I missed you too! My Internet hasn't been working very well lately, but now I'm here and ready to do a DOUBLE HEADER REVIEW!

Chapter 42: Seriously? For real? The one chapter I can't read or review has to be this one. Wow life, what did I do to you. Now listen and pay close attention; I love you and your writing; however, you freakin killed Oddysseus. Not cool. No but really, I respect your creative liberty as an author to kill who you want, yet I will really miss Oddyseus! Also I know She Ratchet is... strange. It took me three times to be able to watch it all the way through. And also, what if Martin and Lucie had a kid? Would it be called Marcie or Luctin? Hmmm, a question to ponder upon.

Chapter 23: First off- CONGRATS! College is a huge deal and I hope you have an amazing time! Now for the real review! Dude, Capitol doors are KILLER. Please keep Katniss safe, I need my mockingjay! I bet she is going off to find her kid the Capitol took. Also, are you trying to kill your readers? First Oddysseus, now we have to worry about Ethan? I never thought I would say this, but I would be sad to see him go. Baby Ethlyssa or Allthan needs its daddy! Hmm, I really do seem to have a problem with combining couple names to get their kid's name(s). I really hope no one does that.

FOOF! My fingers hurt and I'm tired! Goodnight and thanks for writting!
Mockingjay272 chapter 43 . 3/30/2012
Well, way to give us yet another cliffhangar! ETHAN! NO! He better be alright, or I'm not gonna be very happy! In fact, I'm gonan start crying. I will guarantee you. I don't think you'll have Alwin die... I know you like Alwin too much. But Ethan... You already killed Odysseus, not Ethan too! I can't WAIT for the next chapter in this, and in your SYOT! And good luck with college!

~Mock
Mockingjay272 chapter 42 . 3/12/2012
That's it, Kelsey. You've done it. You have finally gotten me to cry by reading one of your stories. I'm sheding a couple tears as I write this. ODYSSEUS! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Oh my God, I'm still trying to process that... he can't be dead! Dear Lord...

But at least Ethan is alive! I was scared for him for a while, but he's here and it's all good. I loved Acacia's talk with Alwin, and how they promised each other they were going to make it through this.

But... Odysseus... I miss him already. RIP ODYSSEUS! YOU SHALL BE MISSED! Poor Odysseus... But wait? How could you stop right there? Really? Now you must... you guessed it... UPDATE! And fast! I really did love this chapter, despite Odysseus' death. It was fabulous writing, as always.

~Mock
Mockingjay272 chapter 41 . 3/3/2012
! ODYSSEUS! PLEASE TELL ME HE'S ALRIGHT! I'm going to cry if he's not! Oh, my dear Lord, that was INTENSE! I loved Acacia's thought when she was going to tell Alwin about her pregnancy, that made me laugh! And I imagine Katniss would be VERY upset about her bow breaking!

But getting back, WAHHHHHHHHHHH! This was just so... unexpected, as I normally know your stories to be. You must write more soon, you can't expect me to stay calm for long after that cliffhangar, can you? I'm glad that you're back and can't wait for more!

~Mock
TeamGaleSoIGetPeeta chapter 41 . 3/2/2012
Aw I'm glad my reviews make your day, but your stories make my week! So ha. Beat that. Punk. And waaa? Mutant alligators- HOLD THE PHONES, WE HAVE AN INTERFERANCE DUE TO EPICOSITY! So that reminds me, go to YouTube and look up: "she ratchet". It is the most crazy, funny and stupid video ever. In all of my classes people will randomly bust out saying: "OMG what do she have on? SHE RATCHET!" But um yeah, give tour step dad my best, and tell him that gis surgery had NOTHING on him! Thanks for writting- Me
AlwaysSeptember chapter 41 . 3/2/2012
Ooh this is sooo good. All i was thinking the whole chapter was finnick :( also can you ah mention my fave person... PEETA? That would be cool yo. Just asking... Really good chapter!

September
AlwaysSeptember chapter 15 . 2/5/2012
This is without a doubt the best oc hunger games story i've ever read. I love your storys. your brillant you truly are!

September
Stephykins18 chapter 40 . 1/19/2012
Aww Cameron! OMG she told Odysseyus? Wow! This is So exciting loved the update I need more! Lol
TeamGaleSoIGetPeeta chapter 40 . 1/17/2012
Don't worry I didn't forget you, I've just been really busy lately! I reeeeeeeally wanted to see Odyssues' face when Ace told him she was pregnant! what will happen to Alyssa now? Can you say CLIFFIE? Oh my gosh, guess what? I bought the katniss, Peeta, and Effie movie posters on amazon today! I told my dad and he gave me the funniest look, he has never read the books you see, so he could never understand! And this is the wrong story but I want to knock out two reviews at once: can you explain what the Capitol does to girls on their periods in the SYOT? I MUST KNOW! Thanks for writing! ~TGSIGP~
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