| Reviews for The Lingering |
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Vongola10 chapter 11 . 12/11/2018 Please continue with your story I love it |
Guest chapter 11 . 3/23/2016 Noooooo, please continue on! Its great, Gokudera is so cool! |
Guest59 chapter 11 . 12/20/2012 Yeahh! Update! I like how things are going (the smile of Gokudera is so beautiful, i can't blame Yamamoto or any other male for just stare). I hope you heal soon! |
AdaraLove chapter 11 . 12/20/2012 Thank you for finally updating after so long! I'm so sorry about the accident you got in ( I can't imagine the pain you were going through for so long, but I'm glad to know that you're alright and you're still invested in this story. This chapter was awesome, as usual! The interactions between Gokudera and Yamamoto are just amazing and make me squeal lol. I'm really interested in Gokudera's powers and Yamamoto's awakening senses, and, oh my gosh, you just had to leave off at a juicy cliffhanger XDD The only thing I can think of that would be a demonic presence in Yamamoto's house would be...maybe Yamamoto's restless and deceased mother. No one ever heard about where Yama's mother is in the original series, so it would be interesting if Yama's mother is still hanging around like a vengeful spirit, but as to why she would be vengeful, I have no idea XD Still, that's all I can think of, but I'll be interested to see what you share with us next! I hope that your arm is healing, and feeling, better now! |
Henchwoman chapter 8 . 12/11/2012 Yay, Namimori High has its own Hellmouth! But the Scoobies are already assembling XD Sorry, sorry - it's just that in the prologue, Gokudera had somehow a Watcher's air for me, and now I can't let go of that impression. |
Henchwoman chapter 6 . 12/11/2012 "I'll kill you and then I'll exorcise you. Painfully". Okay, that (and how Tsuna became 'Tenth' in this reality) does it - you're going straight to my Favorites! |
Guest59 chapter 10 . 12/8/2012 This story is just... Great! The Hibari ghost is hilarious! And i love Gokudera! (and sorry for my poor english) |
Aimless-A-Smiles chapter 10 . 9/22/2012 Ajbdjdmnwkdmdkb. CLIFFHANGER WHY?! You stop when /that person/ comes in?! D: Aaannyyyywho. I love this story can you tell? XD I still found "at least buy me dinner first you idiot" funny. I kinda facepalmed at that. |
AdaraLove chapter 10 . 7/10/2012 This chapter was awesome! Gokudera and Yamamoto's interaction was just super enjoyable till the very end, and the ending was super cool! I felt genuinely afraid and concerned for Kamagata even though I don't know him! Also, even though I love Hibari, I don't mind that he's a haunting poltergeist, because frankly, that's awesome! I would always expect Hibari to come back as that if he were to ever die XDD Also, I'm currently half way through Gintama at the moment, and it's super hilarious! XDD I love it to death, so to know that you're basing the victim off of the composer for that series just made me laugh! XDD |
AdaraLove chapter 9 . 7/3/2012 This was a really heartwarming chapter! I laughed at Tsuna's first outburst about Gokudera reminding him of his mom XDD And I thought the moment between Gokudera and Yamamoto was seriously adorable ) I really enjoyed it and can't wait to see the next chapter! If I have to take a guess as to who's going to show up...I have no idea XDD Thank you for sharing! |
Guest chapter 9 . 7/3/2012 ah, long time no see ! it's strange to read Hayato saying ''Tsuna-san'' O.O very Haru-like... and I wouldn't stay in a place full of spirits either with if my leg hurts ;) I'd like to see Mukuro's apperance because he's fun but update faster next time è.é |
AdaraLove chapter 8 . 4/1/2012 This chapter was so funny and cute! I love reading about the interaction between Yamamoto and Gokudera! Their dynamic is just too cute! I especially love the end of the chapter with Tsuna XD The poor guy was so confused. I can't wait to see what the next chapters have in store for these two! It will be fun to see how their relationship/partnership grows D |
Unknown Variable chapter 8 . 3/31/2012 Ahhh, Tsuna is so oblivious. And it's "You mean it's here in Namimori?" not "You mean its here in Namimori?". Only mistake I could spot. Congrats. |
NerdyToe chapter 7 . 3/25/2012 Wow. I've been looking for a serious 8059 for some time now. This one is really good! I love the concept of it, and it's one of the best au fanfics I've read. Keep it up 8D |
ryuuzaki19 chapter 4 . 3/21/2012 This chapter was probably why I wanted to keep reading this story. Gokudera's nonchalant "Want me to beat them up?" just had in burst into laughters because it's just like him to say something like that! |