wow, this story was great great great!
loved it

I loved this story! I've been binge reading for a whole day and now I am so sleepy! Wahahahaha :D

Oh good to hear more of their descendants. Oh good on kohakurin. Hmm so then who did ayame end up with? Did none of these demons mate with demons?

Ha, I always wondered if kagome was 'her own grandpa'.

I do hope that shippo does not pursue kagome until she is a full adult. Cause otherwise creepo.

Oooh so you have inuyasha and sesshoumaru together not with other demon mates.

Hmmm taking that long to mature into adulthood seems quite unsafe.

I do like though that they establish their new identities births when they were supposedly happen. Surely that makes paperwork much easier.
Hmmm i'd think more of kagome's and inuyasha's kids would have aged faster as inuyasha seemed to take around as long as it took humans to reach adulthood.

Well unless they hopped realities, this kagome shouldn't exist with them since they did have the other kagome return to them. But that's fine and I see what you did.

love this story. As I am 5 months pregnant and emotional, I started crying at the letters sent by the original kagomes family. It was a beautifully written story I am going to have to go and read more of your works now.

This is an amazing story, and I'm so glad you finished it! I love how you put the whole timeline together, from beginning to end—I never would have guessed that there was such a long time between the writing of the chapters.

That was an amazing story. I was thrilled to see that you finally finished it. I had to take the time to read it once I noticed. This was such an amazing story, especially since this pairing is in short supply. You explained it exceptionally well and I love the split timeline angle. There were so many parts of this story that were wonderful and the ending was all I could hope for.

I'm glad you finished this story. Personally, I only just found it, but I'll bet a lot of your old followers will check it from time to time, and be quite excited to see it completed.

Like all of your other Inuyasha fanfiction, this story was smooth, beautifully written, and wonderfully detailed. Keep writing - whether it's fanfic or your own creation - because you've got a great talent for it.

I loved this story! You did a amazing job with this. I stayed up till 5am reading it because it was so good XD

I admit I was very skeptical of reading a Shippo/Kagome fiction. But i tried it out for kicks and giggles. Imagine my utter astonishment to find this fiction tucked away in the folds of fan fiction away from the light of day. This is thoroughly under viewed and greatly overlooked. It is flawless.

This was beautiful. It shattered my heart in so many emotionally gut-wrenching, breathtakingly beautiful, just...absolutely no words to aptly describe what you have managed to do within my heart with this fan fiction. You have perfectly melded the love we had for the original anime/manga and it's heroes, which fuels most of the gut-wrenching, tear-jerking undertones, with a believable future outcome due to the events that transpired from the first time line itself. I wish I could find the words to describe how wonderful this is.

You are a very commanding author with an astounding presence in your story. You are articulate and refined with sophisticated grammatical construction and mesmerizing content in your fictions.

I am not easily impressed but I have to give you the equivalent of an Oscar for this. Nobel book prize or something.

I said all this to say what Sesshomaru could have sufficed succinctly in two simple words:

Well done.

This was breathtaking, absolutely one of a kind. :3

I liked the story overall, but I just kept getting weirded out whenever there was an implication of Sesshomaru and Inuyasha being together romantically. There both just to dominate to work together even if they weren't related in my opinion. Other then that I thought this story was simply adorable. :)

WOW this was amazingly done. It took a while for me to read but I really enjoyed it 3

Wonderful, happy ending. Good job and thank you.