Your story was awesome, I really hope you'll occasionally post a story once in a while. I think if you set your mind to it, you could become a best selling author, that's what I hope to become someday. Good luck with college

Its only the second chapter, and the first time she's lied to far, and yet she already thinks it can't go much longer?

I. Friken. CRIED.

This Story was the best! Can I be your friend!? Also can I copy this Story to read it to my kids one day!?

WTF MAN?! Wtf. That is all I currently have to say.

Kid and her married would be cute. If you do make that happen, it better be damn well written.

She isn't going to get raped… right?

YAY! GREY GOT DUMPED! WOOHOO! NOT! XD

XD Kid doesn't even bother to listen to an explanation does he? XD Wonderful, I love fights! *Please note the sarcasm.

_ XD Looove it! (Why do I keep on referencing Dragon Tales?)

XD This was amazing. I'm sure Maka had no complaints?

Its sooooo good by the way \(•_•)
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/ \. Good job

this or the next chapter better not be rape if it is i will rage quit this story .

Wow, Lord Death is creepy now

... O.O wow

SPIRIT YOU'RE SUCH A PERV!

YAY! I can't wait!