| Reviews for Agate |
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   roon0 chapter 13 . 12/12/2016 I don't supose there is any chance you would finish this but it would be nice if you did. Here's hoping. |
| roon0 chapter 1 . 12/12/2016 What a great start. |
| Guest chapter 8 . 12/21/2015 I love the story and I hope you update soon. PLEASE! Just a few things you should know, for editing purposes. Tomarrow is spelled tomorrow, squab is spelled squib, McGonnigal is spelled McGonagall, and it's Mrs Figg not Figgs. These corrections aren't meant to be taken as a flame. I'm not criticizing you, I'm just doing a little friendly spell checking. Don't feel bad, even the Harry Potter books that have professional proofreaders go over them have mistakes. I know in the first book Percy is called Perry and if you Google it you can find other mistakes that people who are paid big bucks missed. I hope Charlie beats the crap out of Ron! Some Hermione/Marcus lemony goodness would be appreciated, too. Again...PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON. Your readers miss you. |
| Sampdoria chapter 13 . 7/23/2015 Thank you so much for the update. |
| Aphrodite-Venus-u.k chapter 13 . 7/23/2015 Great chapter! So glad to see an update! |
| Concrete63 chapter 13 . 7/22/2015 Thank you for writing. |
| Angel JJK chapter 13 . 7/22/2015 Good that they know where Ron is now. Hope Marcus can make up with Mione. Til next time. |
| winxgirl1997 chapter 13 . 7/22/2015 Plz update soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plz |
| Erulastiel-Ithilwen chapter 13 . 7/22/2015 Did not bother with this chapter. Please change your dialogue to the correct structure and repost. |
| Guest chapter 13 . 7/21/2015 yay... I'm so happy you updated! please keep going love it! |
| Aphrodite-Venus-u.k chapter 12 . 4/4/2015 Wonderful little story! I hope you update soon! |
| kaylafillpot chapter 12 . 3/27/2015 Update soon |
| Erulastiel-Ithilwen chapter 12 . 3/19/2015 Structure needs work. Remember a new line each time someone new speaks. "Who was it?" Draco demanded. Fred glared. "Why would I tell you Ferret?" "We are her friends too," Greg reminded him. That is how dialogue should be structured. I also corrected some grammatical mistakes in that section. Please always proof read before posting. |
| arabellagrace chapter 12 . 3/19/2015 Hahahaha - that will be great if she's the Aunt! Marcus needs to woo not order lol |
| Sampdoria chapter 12 . 3/19/2015 I am so absolutely trilled for this update, I had a wonderful time re-reading several chapters to catch up with the story:-)) |
