excellent o/t, o/s thanks for sharing ;D

Amazing! I love ;D

It's was a really good read.

Really, really, really (I could go on) sexy. A fantastic lemon on it's own right, made even better with Bella and Jasper starring in it. I don't know what else to say other than it's jaw-dropping hotness. I hope to read more of your work in the future!

Hot damn! This I am definitely favorite-ing as soon as I log in! Awesome. Thanks so much. Plus, JasperxBella 3

Aww, very sweet ending :) I find reading this type of BDSM soooo engaging. I would never, ever try it, just because I know I'm too much of a pansy. But boy, if I were into that... it seems very satisfying.

Thanks for writing! I really loved it :)

Love the story it certainly was different lol

Wow yummy loved it thank you

Most interesting! I kept trying to figure out if it was Jasper or James, glad it was Jasper. You're really good with all the scenes, it was very intense! Thanks for sharing! )

Wow! You either know your stuff through personal experience or you have one hell of an imagination!

I love that we got another chapter of this. Your Mistress is one kinky lady. And I love it! Great job.

I love how u added his name right at the end ;)

Nice I have recently started reading dom!Bella and this one is different but interesting.

wiping the drool... now that is really something different! Jasper as a sub! wonderful idea.

Prassacut

Dariachenowith commented about this story in her blog.

I'm over the moon that I followed her advice and read this oh so hot one shot you did for her birthday.

Great short story! I need a shower now!

Cory