Greetings vjulesv! Yep...simply wonderful mix of mythology storyline for Shizuru and Natsuki! I love the characters and you did a splendid job of portraying the characters and their feelings. I especially enjoy reading of Shiz's POV. She is a complex character and in your story and you were able to showcase how she really isn't so much different from other people.

Can tell you how much I re-read this story...so many times and it always seems fresh!

Take care...hope you come back to finish your other fictions!

Ciao!

Well Done! Great story, I love how you mixed mythology with Mai-Hime and still stuck true to the characters! I recommend reading this!

This was one of the stories I managed to read when things were very busy. It was so fascinating that I kept coming back to it, and of course Natsuki's sacrifice made my heart ache. You're so good with characters. Natsuki, Shizuru and the others are written so clearly that they stayed themselves even in as mythological beings. It's a beautiful story and I hope that one day you'll write more about this world. I can't help wondering how they dealt with Natsuki's vulnerability in the future.

Ah still the best

oohdamn *shudders* this was one hella rollercoaster! amazing, truly.

u know what, u can just kill me, ohhgod my feels

Maaann! How I love this story!

I really don't understand. the goddess would be able to leave anytime she wanted. Persephone is a special case

you say you don't mind constructive criticism, so here's some; good authors don't create drama through misinterpretations and misunderstandings. it can simply frustrate most of your readers. their are many other ways to create drama. the cliche heard the few first words she spoke then ran off before hearing the rest almost made me drop your story with a sigh. fortunately tho you have many talents as a writer as well. I'm enjoying your story and your writing talent so I will definitely finish it. thx for taking the time to write this story to entertain us 8)

is her finding out if she's immortal or not really the plot? it's already gotten quite old, hope it doesn't drag too much further

Athena is the goddess of battle strategy and tactics, there is def a difference. which given your context is something u obviously knew, which confuses me why you said war. and it takes WAY longer than an hour to roast a deer over a fire lol. that being said, your story seems like it will be very entertaining ty for writing it 8) I'm sure I will very much enjoy it

Wooohooo! Bravo! Very magnificent work! Love the story!

I do believe I read your "Theogony" fic at least 5x and I still find it very fresh and entrancing! I love how you write in Shiz POV as well as Nat.

Please do not stop writing or imagining. Thank you for sharing.

Greek mythology and one of my fave Yuri couple pairing. well done!

LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS! I love stuff with Natsuki and Shizuru, and gods and goddesses! this store is awesome and well done!