This is one of my favorite fics I read when I was younger, these last two chapters absolutely broke my heart and I chedck back once a year or so to see if it was updated

Please updated!

I stumbled upon this late one night as I couldn't sleep, and needless to say I didn't get much sleep as I wanted to read it for as far as it went. I hope you're still working on this because you left us with quite the cliffhanger! It's totally not fair ;P

Also, I Love Chesh.

I do really love your story, but the some the recent chapters just killed me xc ! I feel really bad for Ches and it makes me kind of sad, however I am still expectant of your other chapters please update as quickly as possible
Thank you cx

This story is absolutely AWESOME and would be even more awesome if there was another chapter

Please update! LOVE THIS FRIGGIN STORY!

... White is an asshat in this chapie...

MORE PLZZ I CAN'T WHAT!?

Omg these chappies are awesome I am sasutenluvr sister by the way I dont know what picture she made ur talking about. I'm kinda like her stalker lol

great story poor alice cant wait to see where this goes

Poor Chess! Perhaps you can give him some sort of consolation prize? Like a biscuit?

Poor heartbroken Chess... Is he going off to beat some sense into White? Because if he doesn't, I will- the girl's already broken and traumatized enough. Yeesh.
What was in that journal that he didn't know she'd read? Because I doubt he'd get that worked up over her knowing he'd been spying on her for the queen. Or a love confession. I'm really lost lol
Don't worry, Chess! We, your fangirls, will always love you, even though I will always picture you as a catboy because those are pretty sexy creatures. A nice pair of ears and a tail would suit you so well...

Please add more! FYI, Chess for the win.

So I've signed up just so I can follow your story. I am enjoying it tremendously. I have no idea who I'd prefer her to be with but I'm sure she'll end up exactly where she belongs. Total faith in you. Please don't be away too long.

I have to say, all things considered, I'm definitely team Chess... :)