Do it man you are an excellent writer a few more chapters ? Is that what their called never mind just keep writing your good at it but only do it if you want to

why no updates yet?!

Aaaaand that's the day his dad leaves Vault 101.

lemon scene! You are awesome

Please make a lemon scene

This was great I shows what could of happen between the fast forwarding of years between 10 to 16 to finally 19 leaving the vault you show do more like this

KEEP WRITING I'M ADDICTED!

I'm really enjoying this story. But I don't think you summon stuff from the pip-boy.

Nice story. I think you misspelled Father though.

So, I read your story in one day. And I absolutely adore it! Your writing skills are phenomenal and I wish I had made this, in all honesty. You write everything in perfect detail and amazing clarity. And I love how you write out emotions and moments in those emotions, it's very vivid :3 you should continue this somehow, maybe expand on it? It's really good and I wanna see more~

I really enjoy reading this. Maybe it helps because I'm about to go to bed and the fluff is sooo... fluffy?

And it doesn't seem all that dark for Butch. I can actually picture him doing that, so don't worry about it.

:(

That's sad...especially if you follow the ending...

Nice little fic. I love LW/Amata stories. You should do more of them.