Reviews for Concerted
Rookblonkorules chapter 1 . 9/14/2018
This story was incredible. I would have hoped for more detail regarding his rescue/recovery and especially some DaddyBats, but this was altogether a very satisfying read.
That last line in particular though. That was brilliant.
Cheshyre chapter 1 . 8/14/2017
I realize you've probably gotten a lot of comments like this but I thought I'd ask anyway could you please elaborating on this story I'm not asking for a full-blown plot just like another 2 chapters about his recovery, the teams point of view on finding him and getting him back and Batman's Vengeance on cobra...
Thank you!
gidster chapter 1 . 1/10/2017
please continue !
musicalgirl4474 chapter 1 . 7/9/2015
Oh yeah, you go after him, Batman. I love protective!Batman, even if it's only after the fact, and you wrote all of this (the pain, the villain, Robin's thoughts) so very well.
FishInAFadora chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
oh that was so good and well written and it had me at the edge of my seat! a masterpiece one of the best one shots i have ever had the pleasure of reading. i especially loved the last line, if you decide to continue this, then id love to see Batman take Kobra down :)
VenustheMarvelTurtle chapter 1 . 8/30/2013
OOOOH ISH Kobra watch out! Bats is gonna get you!
This detail was amazing. Loved Batmans pov
turret towers do tower chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
Of course, if you mess with Robin, you mess with the whole family. Wait, I mean the whole extended family. Plus close friends. Plus people who consider him an ally in a twisted way (which is how it always works with bats...). Plus fangirls. You do not want to mess with the fangirls. Things tend to get...ugly. All I'll say is that fangirls are very very willing to break Batman's number rule.
Haha Pseudonym chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
Simply too amazing for words. I have been looking for a fic like this for days. Thank you.
AgentWhimsi chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
Crying now, how cruel can you be? That was horrible! And yet... amazing... I'm confused now. Really good, even if it is depressing.
mixxi chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
go bats ! your wrath shall teach them :)

and great story btw .. but there was one thing that bothered me .. the cult leader of kobra doesnt has a lazarus pit ...

ra's al ghul does :P

minor mistake:P

anyhow i loved your story really :D
Brightpath chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
is there more? tell me the fanfic didn't end there!
Black Friar chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
I read this a few weeks ago when I started reading Young Justice, but I'm only getting around to reviewing now (didn't have an account at the time).

First; that was a seriously cool story; loved the interaction between Robin and Kobra. Also, full marks on the Robin whumpage, satisfying but not overly done. Perfect.
Knight's Day chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
EVERY BODY RUUUUUN! Bats is ANGRY, WE'RE ALL DOOOOMED!
DarkMousyRulezAll chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
OOOOOOOHHHHH

Ya know I usually don't read YJ fics, but this one is pretty awesome!

OH NYU ROBIN!

:D :D update very soon please!
Bethlovesall chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
good story!
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