Isn't this on otaku forms?

Love it please update soon!

Wow your a very great wrighter!

I love this story so far! I can't wait to see where it goes!

Really good, i love the story's atmosphere ! I cant wait for rhe next :3

Hey, please update I wanna know whats next

i realy wnat to konw that happens next can't wait please update soon

(sob) T-T why did you STOP ?

' ... .MORE!

I love it! I wanna read more of this! :D

It's nice, and I've always wanted Len to like me that way, and oh God, I wish this was real, but I'm still a RinXLen fan so this really wasn't to my taste. But please update. It's getting good!

I truely, TRUELY hope you decide to continue this.

And the way you write and describe everything is so different and original.

I just love everything about this story. The description, dialogue, vocabulary, and thinking processes.

I agree with one of the other reviewers, I really feel like I'm in the same scene interacting with them.

Gah, words can't express my admiration for this story.

Update soon, please. But no rush :'D

~ Renny

Loved the story please update soon

i really like this. i will favorite it so write more!

This is amazing so far, I'm in love with this fic.

This fic really does establish a personal and connected feel with the reader.

I felt like I was actually in the scene with them, feeling the thing that this character was feeling and witnessing.

I'm really wondering how this will play into later chapters though, because even though the reader is the main character within the story, how will the name of this soul be established?

It's an interesting idea, and I can't wait for more! ;)

I hope you will continue with this.