That was... cruel and heartbreaking and absolutely beautiful. It would have been awesome if there was a follow up with them actually finding Sasuke...I want Sasuke to know how much he means to them TT

Good god. Youre a spawn of the devil himself! Well, no. Not really. So damn good. And I have high standards because I’ve read most of Stephen King’s books. This is at par. Just, wow!

you have no idea how much i cried because of thisteam seven is like super sensitive to me bc of all the sht theyve been through and their dynamicsoh god, this is amazing.

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA. Aaa? aaa.

Seriously. My heart. Pulp, mush, a puddle of organic tissue, sloppy joes, the weird blend of stuff that's the before part of a sausage, and so on and so forth until the cows come home.

Ouch. I am currently writing this comment with blurry eyes and a slightly damp keyboard. I commend you, internet wizard, for managing yet again to pull my heartstrings with fictional ninja angst. Please take responsibility for your cruel, cruel actions and accept my outpourings of incoherent love because apparently I am now a masochist. (tsunade's necklace aaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA)

Again. I would try to dig up the hatred necessary for making me feel emotions again, but the general awe for your amazing word prowess overshadows any pettiness. You have done a good, fellow Naruto-er. A good stab to the back, but a good nonetheless.

Have a wonderful day.

This is one of the best stories I've ever read!
It's absolutely amazing!
The way you wrote it!
The story itself!
Absolutely fantastic!

*rolls in several years late* this hurts so bad you absolutely cruel asshole what devils bargain did you make

This was amazing. I love the way you write team seven. Not sure what else to say. It was so good. Thanks!

I was sad. I thought you killed them, but I'm glad you didn't and it was just an elaborate scheme. Schemes I understand. thanks for sharing!

This was so good- I love reading bout Team 7's dynamics. Really original storyline too and amazingly written. Thanks for this!

this made me super sad but also very happy/relieved because no one actually dies like i was ready to bawl crocodile tears at the end THANK YOU FOR NOT KILLING ANYONE

yep. i guess you better not die..

There is no genjutsu in Konoha, outside of Danzo's illegal bullshit, that the Kyuubi or the Sharingan could not break. Naruto is a fucking Jinchuuriki, even if the whole 'chakra web' thing wasn't the most ridiculous thing I had ever heard of it would never have been able to drain him of chakra, at least, not without being completely destroyed by the sheer toxicity of the Kyuubi's power.

If Naruto were in a "hopeless situation" where all his friends were going to die he would become so enraged the Kyuubi would be unleashed, essentially dropping a nuke on the 'chakra web', dispelling the genjutsu anyway, and vaporizing most of Konoha. No body would risk that for a retarded test.

The entire premise of this is flawed, to the point that it angers me.

Does that mean Sasuke in this situation is fake?

Wow. Nice story. Thanks

If anyone's ooc it's Sakura and Sasuke. Moron.