Reviews for Heaaven's Light and Hellfire
Mickey663 chapter 1 . 1/7/2015
OMFG I loved this so much. Wish u would continue it. Love ur stories.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/20/2014
OMFG! I LOVE THIS! I love JohnxMai pairings, and i love the jealousy w/ Naru! So cool! Please oh please oh freaking please continue this!
Yihanna chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
:0 OMG WHT HAPPENS NEXT!
FireRubyRPG9898 chapter 1 . 4/10/2013
I want to kill Naru NOW!
ShirePuffWaifu chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
oh my god, oh my god, OH MY GOD!
I would have never thought in my life time that that ending would happen. Its sending chills down my spine! So good! XD
Spirit of the white fox chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
WHAT THE FUCK! YOU MADE NARU LOOOK LIKE SHIT. I apologize for my langeuge. But Im a bigger MaixNaru fan than JohnxMai. but it was a great story with a few bad bumps -
ArtisticAngel6 chapter 1 . 1/26/2012
Wow that is so suspenseful and dramatic... I LOVED IT! Check out my stories c wat u like
Haru Inuzuka chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
-blinks- Shit. O.o Sad and beautiful, and very well written. John and Mai are fave characters of mine (along with Lin, Naru (sometimes) and Bou-san), and I think they are very cute together.
Ghost of the Rain chapter 1 . 5/19/2011
ohhhhhhhhhh. Wow. Very well written. Are you sure you only want it to be a one shot? It's a pretty good story so far.
Little Sweet Romanian Girl chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
Sad,sad,sad,but very beautiful! I love it! I think that John and Mai are a perfect couple.
Kireastiel chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
Sad... But beautiful..

I always loved John. And I love Naru also.. 'sigh'

D Awesome one shot by the way!