You're never updating this story again, are you? :(

u should finish this. its good

If you've read Percy Jackson, which I'm sure pretty much everyone has, then you get the holding up the sky reference. After the huge God vs Titan war, the Titan Atlas was forced to stop Ouranos, the sky, from embracing Gaea, the earth. If he failed, then the world would get crushed. Literally. That's pretty much a summary of it.

It's Lawrence III! You should've named him Lawrence IV! Also, four is the unlucky number so this would element his failure.

Well, Cynthia could get a cameo from her office when she sees the newspaper because she knows about legal rights. I don't write about illegal things for humor. That type of stuff is serious.

You know, that cameraman could get sued. He's breaking protraital rights without the expressed written consent of the subject of the photo and using it for monetary value. He could get put in jail for a long time.

Lets see... First Pikachu can't use electric attacks on ELECTIVIRE due to his motor drive ability. Second, they faced in the semi-finals with their last pokemon being Infernape and ELECTIVIRE. Third, you ignored Tobias who, although he hardly appeared at all, was very important to the tournament. And lastly, I hope you got the messages at the beginning of the review.

You most defenitavly have to continue, it's an amazing story.

your creativity literally flows off the page i love reading it

a grea story and a great plot shure to please many fans

:D

Oh my gosh... I haven't reviewed in a while!*curses self under breath*

I was grounded, and I lost the story... *smiles* Well at least I found it!:D

I changed my name too. Used to be EmpoleonLv.100, but it's Danielle Fenton now. So.. keep up the good work!n_n

-Dani

I. LUUUUUV. IT. UPDATE SOOOOOON! PEARLSHIPPING 4EVAA!

-Ama

There's also another reason why Paul was at Snowpoint city besides battling Pyramid King Brandon.

The story is getting update soon.