Wait what? Sceptile (one of Ash's strongest pokemon) gets knocked out like its nothing and then Tododile (who Ash hasn't used since Johto 2 regions ago and wasn't especially powerful and also unevolved) beats an Ursaring in nothing flat AND a Weavile... Dafuq? Next thing I know, Charizard (Ash's most likely strongest Pokémon besides Pikachu) will be taken out by a pidgey or rattatta.

Why do u don't complete the story

This is way too OOC for me and the grammer could be a bit better. This story is also going to way too fast and there is no detail. I love the storyline and plot except for Misty and Dawn. They are crazy.

What the fuck am I reading, a three year old can do a better fanfiction then you

*An angel of a woman in her early twenties walk to her cousin's computer *
Hello my name is Pearl and I'm using my cousin, Phoenix's computer to put a comment and I just wanna is that I hope that Ash stops all the evil he can and I'm not gonna lie but when I read Butterfree die I cried so much.
Oh and I'm the daughter of Palkia ( He is my Favorite and hence the nickname Pearl) and my cousin has decided to send me go help May.

*Sighs heavily* So Reshiram and Zekrom takes the task to keep you Chosen One safe and my grandson goes to help him in his quest to stopping this evil that pollutes this world but I do have faith in him and Phoenix *looks at the revealing orb and see Ash* Never give up on what you believe in my Chosen One but don't run from what is important to you *sees May, Manaphy, Glaceon, and Victini to the left of Ash* you will find him May but be careful the road will be dangerous.

* Walks up to a trunk and opens it* The time has come to put it back on*a female Lucario and Gallade stand next to the door*(Lucario) Master are you sure
Yes *puts a cloak that looks like Connor Kenway's but is a dark blue with silver trims like Dialga * If Ash is going down this road then he is going to need some help.* take out two hidden blades (left one looks like Ezio's custom made blade while the right one looks like Connor's) along with two cutlasses (right one is the pistol sword while the left is a sword helps control my aura)*
(Gallade) what about May
I got that covered *takes out a tomahawk and some pistols*
Let's go
*Leaves the room and says goodbye to a beautiful Gardevoir and 2 Ralts* l
We will be back
* Takes five luxary balls and one unique looking poke ball and puts around my neck* I hope Dialga knows what I'm doing is right.
(Gallade) knowing your dad he would believe that Ash needs your help
Thanks Jack
*Takes out a luxary and releases a Bravariy* Lets head to Unova Geranimo.

Hey do you accept OCs

i loved ur fanfic

Please hurry up

Shame... This is like the TV show... Crap baby pokemon beating up fully evolved because that's totally fucking plausible

Bro don't give up on this series its so good and I can tell that you still have so many ideas
so trust me when I say that finishing it will be worth it man.

Damn.. This is just the tv show. Disappointing

Why won't you update? Please, it's so good! :(

Ash/Red is much more cooler now TNX