Love it

This is a pretty nice story. I like the interplay of humor and drama. There's just one thing: James is not a French name. To be honest, I don't even know how to pronounce James in French (I am a fluent French-speaker), and I don't believe there is a French equivalent. The closest name I can think of would be Jean (the French John). It doesn't really affect the story (it's just more realistic for his French cover to have a French name), and you might not care enough to do anything about it (which is fine, of course), I just hope this review is helpful in some way.

Hi,
this is very interesting, exciting and well written. I really enjoyed reading this. You did a great job at writing this. Well done. Will James and the Tom become friends? Will Tom find out the truth?

But...but...what about Tom?

You've reduced me to a sobbing mess. Boo you horse. (Sorry if you thought that was mean sorry I didn't mean it I'm just very sad rn, it's an altered mean girl quote, don't be mad at meeee)

love it!

Ahh poor Alex ... or should I say James :(

Fantastic! Please tell me there will be more in this verse? *puppy-dog-eyes*

Oh okay... That was an unexpected ending.

cool

*dying of laughter* I...want to see picture of Ana. Omigod, that would be priceless! XD It's pretty much both morbid and amusing that Alex attends his own funeral, but I like it! He kept the Alexander in his new name. Sentiment?

If he's French, surely it should be Alexandre?
Anyway, love these stories, they're brilliant :D

i love this... arc? anyway, i love these short stories and how they all go together. theyre really good! LD

Clearly, there was trouble on her partner's side as well, based on his uneven breathing and the sound of gunfire on his side too. "Aww, can't run well in that skirt, White?"

JOG JOG RUN RUN RUN JOG

I think eagle should've fainted here i would've