This was incredible! I've never read a story about them written in second person but it really worked here, it made the story really special.
Thank you for sharing!

Perfect wordings, perfect ending, love it!

Hey this is cute. Thanks for sharing. :)

This was gorgeous. The contrast between Logan (ugh) and Dean (total gag) and then Jess (SWOON) was perfect and I loved it :)

I especially love the paragraphs beginning "The margins are crushed with thoughts..." and "you remember now the intimacy of finding your name in his margin...". The line "always a pleasing little turn in your gut, like being caught on his hook again." Wow! It's perfect. I can't describe why. It just is perfect.

Aaarrgghhh.. So so SO good!

One of my favorite stories that I have ever read. Very creative approach and awesome writing!

This is extraordinary. Truly. I was looking through old stories that I favourited and other stories by the same people, and I am very glad I found this. I am now off to read some of your other stuff because if it is anything like as good as this, I am in for a good afternoon.

This is an adorable story. I love the Rory focus. Such an adorable way to get back together with Jess. Great job

New favorite future lit story? I think so!

I love the perspective of it...all the "you thinks" and all of that. I thought that was pretty clever.

And the ending. The ending. So hopeful and happy. Made me smile :))

this was incredible! thank you!

this is one of the best one shots i've read in a while you should do a sequal

I love that she calls Logan, but just shows up with Jess. I love that he says all the things she doesn't say with the other boys. Dean- still working at Doose's, with "the same hang-dog expression he's been wearing since he left you"- "Sad to see you" sums that one up pretty perfectly. I was never rooting for Dean, but I think we all kind of wanted better things for him anyway.

Things that struck me in particular: "When you emerge it's Christmas Eve, and snow is falling, and it's hard not to feel touched by the magic of Stars Hollow, aglow with twinkle lights and flush with carolers. The snow sticks, but your stress melts."

This is gorgeous, and captures everything about Stars Hollow that it should. I miss that place!

And this was the one poignant piece of the fic that I just can't get over: "You remember, now, the intimacy of once finding your name in his margin. No expansion, no punctuation, just "rory." And the passage beside it something lovely, something aching, though the words have drifted past what you can now reach. You remember thinking then, for the first time, that this was what love was like with Jess. Your name in his margin."

There are no words for how beautiful this is.

Anyway. Lovely writing as always and beautiful imagery. You're ability to storytell with impeccable pacing and no extraneous filler is wonderful. Every sentence carries weight, which is not something you find too often in fanfic. Hope to see more to come!

So happy to see another story from you! That was wonderful, as always. And I think it's perfect as is-an incredible one-shot that doesn't need a follow-up, because we the readers can come up with that on our own following your lovely prose.

Oh just...YAY.

So good. It's an original take on re-meeting Jess, which is hard to find online. It's just really great writing, really gentle, and smart and non-sentimental, but truthful. Really lyrical. Okay, I'm stopping now. But I think it's great.